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Reviews for Total Eclipse

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  • From ANON - jes on September 08, 2006
    ahah. this is too good. can't wait for you next installment. should be interesting! ;)
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on September 07, 2006
    This looks to be a real cute story. Email me with updates, please! :D Oh, and you transposed "gentleman" with "gentelman" in this chapter, or maybe the previous one. I can't remember now. Other than that, great premise and followthrough, so far.
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  • From ANON - Truth44 not logged in on September 02, 2006
    Well, this was interesting. It was pretty well-written (just a few grammar mistakes, but I'm not so knit-picky as to mention that here). You've intirgued me. Seriously. Though I must tell you that your chapters are unbearably short. I get to the end of each one and I'm like, "where's the rest?" And also, are you planning on writing every other chapter as a reflection of the other--simply told from another POV? I say that because it gets a bit tedious to read, and I've never seen anyone pull it off well enough to make me actually want to finish reading. I'm not insinuating anything; just saying.

    Anyway, like I said before, I'm intrigued. Update soon.

    Truth
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  • From ANON - Carol on August 27, 2006
    How intriging!! I guess something happen between them. i like the story looks very interesting and you write very good. Do not leave us waiting to long. UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Elbe on August 21, 2006
    Nice, really nice hon! Surprised me again, on what Draco did in the war. Now I wonder if these two will get together or not....lots of arguements are coming down the pipe, I can see it now. lol ;) Um... what happens after Draco saves Harry? sorry but you got me wondering now. ;) so a excellent job on your second chapter!

    Elbe.
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  • From ANON - Bella on August 16, 2006
    Please continue...a pleasant start
    can't wait for more...
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  • From ANON - mack on August 15, 2006
    fabulous :) keep going.
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  • From ANON - Dani on August 15, 2006
    Looks good so far! Can't wait to read the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Elbe on August 15, 2006
    This is really good. For a moment I thought you had taken us back in time once Hermione said those words. But you proved me wrong. wonderful job, I can not wait to read more of this!

    Elbe.
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  • From ANON - Siobhan on August 14, 2006
    Wonderful so far. I look forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on August 14, 2006
    Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this goes. :)
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  • From ANON - mona on August 14, 2006
    awesome! keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on August 13, 2006
    Great Start!!! I can't wait for more!!! It's very well written and it flowed together!!! ^__-
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  • From ANON - DragonKisser on August 13, 2006
    Oh, I already love where this is headed :-) Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 13, 2006
    This one is not a problem to review! Congratulations on writing a wonderful first chapter. Your story is definitely one that I will watch closely. I thought you might be deliberately using the words "tiny, little" in reference to Ms O'Kelley (?) but do you find it to be a little redundant? I hope you post again and quickly. This has all the earmarks of a great story.
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