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Reviews for Woke Up This Morning

By : Domine
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?
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  • From RagaMuffinsun on April 22, 2007
    That was beautifully written. You handled rather dark subject matter very well without going for over the top melodrama.
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  • From ANON - silverandsilent on August 18, 2006
    Oh the angst! It was good. Keep up the writing! :)
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on August 15, 2006
    i am definitely a sucker for the angsty ones, and this was no exception, the story is great.

    constructive criticism:watch your tense. generally when you write, you use past tense. it's ok to use present tense in contemporary fiction, however you need to stick to a tense. in the first paragraph you use present tense, so everything else needs to be either present tense, or that part needs to switch to past tense. i can beta read for you if you like.
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