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Reviews for Pressing his luck

By : Zhailei
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 26, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - flamer on October 22, 2006
    IT SUCKED!
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  • From ANON - Leah Phillips on August 27, 2006
    I'm not really a true Harry Potter fan, my boyfriend though, has got me into watching the films, and I really like this idea. The relationship between Harry and Hermione in the films is very strong, and I really think Harry could be like how you described him, given the right situation, like this one.

    Like a true sex craving man, he took advantage of a situation, and I
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  • From ANON - (unknown) on August 23, 2006
    its an ok story but it could use some improvement.
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  • From ANON - sadfru on August 19, 2006
    Awesome, any chance of a one shot from hermione's perspective, the confusion, arousal, hurt she must have been experiencing would be a challenge to write :)
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  • From ANON - dylan666 on August 16, 2006
    This is the first Harry/Hermione that I read and I must say that it is quite unusual (for Harry's action, I mean), but not umplesant. I think you should write a sequel: the story can't end like that
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  • From Zhailei on August 16, 2006
    Well, thank you for your candour, but I have to say I disagree. This was my imagination; what is contained in the story, is the story.

    Other people have asked for more, so it is possible that there will be a sequel. On the subject of whether or not stories are best left slightly ambiguous or fully resolved, however, I think we'll just have to agree to dsiagree.
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  • From ANON - Little Astronaut 12 on August 16, 2006
    It's not badly written, but I have to say I don't like it. The end is just way too open. If I want to use my imagination I would write my own story and would not read yours. I want to read your imagination! I would prefer it, if you could make this a short story with three or four chapters. As a oneshot it is a flop.
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  • From Zhailei on August 16, 2006
    To the person who said they loved it, thank you!

    To anonymous, the ending was left deliberately open. I know some people like finality, especially in a one-shot, but I'm one of those people who adores ambiguity, and being able to make up your own mind. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.

    To everyone who reviewed, thank you. Critisism and praise are both always welcome, and I'm grateful that you would take the time to read and review.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on August 16, 2006
    I enjoyed your fic even though it was somewhat short. The ending was a little off you left it too open. When you write one shots you need to finish with more finality. That would be okay if you were planning post a sequal but still you should have ended it with something like Harry telling her it would be okay and/or Hermione running away, but this is your fic and you can do what you want just thought I would mention it other than the ending the rest was somewhat enjoyable. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - loved it... on August 15, 2006
    you can't let it stop there!!
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  • From ANON - nimistar on August 15, 2006
    that was different. i have never seen someone put harry in that role before and it was ok. it seems like a story that could be continued though.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on August 15, 2006
    Not bad.
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  • From Zhailei on August 15, 2006
    Thank you, DarkGoddess. It didn't turn out exactly as I had expected, but I was quite pleased with it.
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  • From ANON - DarkGoddess on August 15, 2006
    Not my usual taste, but it was actually quite good. Keep it up.
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