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Reviews for Storing Up Trouble

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 30, 2008
    RE: chapter two

    I'm glad that Hermione had the courage to break things off with Ron. What a moron to want to propose marriage when they aren't even out of school yet. Ron is an immature, little boy that has had his feelings hurt, but that doesn't make it right for him to be nasty and call her a bitch.

    I'm happy that she has at least one supportive friend in Luna. It was nice of her to have bought Hermione a cup of hot chocolate.

    I agree with Severus--it was sexy and exciting of him to grab her to talk to her in private and steal some kisses and caresses.

    Bummer about Severus losing a good friend in Regulus Black. I think that it is fantastic of him to want to give assistance to Hermione in the search for and disposal of Voldemort's horcruxes.

    EEK! Since Severus has a black mark on his chest, is being poisoned as Dumbledore was?

    Is the book that he is hinting at "Potions Moste Potent" (or however it is spelled)? I'm glad that he is making sure that she realizes that he is still on their side in the war.

    Mmm, I like how they affect each other physically and sexually.
    ;~D

    Lucky girl, to have a date with him everyday between the hours of eight to nine in the potions store cupboard. I hope that Harry and/or Ron don't look at the Maurader's Map and notice them together, you know? I love how he slips right into asking about her plans for the holidays, and invites her to stay with him, for the convenience of passing information to her--RIGHT!
    *WINK-WINK-KNUDGE-KNUDGE-....* *LEER* *WEG* *SMIRK*
    ;~D

    How very naughty of him to refresh his mark upon her neck--wicked man! I wouldn't have him any other way!

    It's nice to have friends that care, but when they stick their noses in where they don't belong, they need to back off and let their friend live their life and learn by their mistakes. Harry should be happy for Hermione that she found someone that she feels comfortable enough with to allow him to mark her (not that she had much choice, LOL).
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 30, 2008
    RE: chapter one

    *SQUEE* OMG--freaking lucky girl to have Severus Snape interested in her, kissing her passionately, and marking her as his woman. Damn, I WANT TO BE HERMIONE!!!
    ;~D

    I love this story!

    Oh no! You haven't updated this story since November 10, 2006. Please don't let this story be abandoned. Perhaps you just forgot to update it?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 16, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2007
    I love plz update soon. I beg u its to good to let go.
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  • From ANON - mary on February 13, 2007
    update please.
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  • From on February 10, 2007
    Wow plz tell me its toms baby. I love tom.So good luck with life and writing.
    plz update soon i'm checking every day and tomtimes twice a day.
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  • From ANON - xXxMrs.SnapexXx on February 04, 2007
    hurry and up date!!!!
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  • From ANON - mary on January 28, 2007
    Update soon, please. I just gotta know whose baby she's preggo with.
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  • From ANON - *DB* on November 26, 2006
    @9 awesome story!!!! I LOVE it!!! I do hope you continue it!!!PLEASE update soon
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on November 12, 2006
    Wow I love how Hermione feinted at the news, guess it
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 11, 2006
    well...IT BETTER DAMN WELL BE SEVERUS' BABY! okay i am alright now. that was a GREAT chapter and i enjoyed it immensely that was one great lemonly sence ;). do update soon!
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on November 10, 2006
    Wow! That was hot! Can't talk. Got to find hubby. "Pant". "Pant". "Pant".
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 10, 2006
    Excellent chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - angel on November 10, 2006
    man .. i hope there is away to find out ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please upate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 10, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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