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By : avari20
  • From ANON - Dee Dee on September 03, 2006
    I love your story of obsessive Draco. Maybe you can make it into a series. It is so intense I would love to see where you take it next there are so many possibilities. Perhaps instead of Draco betraying the Order, he becomes a member so he can have Hermione. If he realizes she would never forgive his betrayal of her friends.
    Maybe Hermione gets pregnant and forces Draco
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  • From ANON - Speedy7 on September 03, 2006
    Hey there,
    One word WOW!!
    Maybe you can write more on this than just a oneshot. It would be a great story!
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Lioness_of_Fire on August 21, 2006
    Great Fic! Even though it's something that scared you, you managed really well, and you made an excellent job! I love the way you write, either comic stories or darker ons like this, you always make the ones who read get exactly what the caracters are feeling. Carry on like this! I just hope 2 things: 1- that it's not a one shot, I'd love to see how Draco will get on with his plans and Hermione's reaction to all this; 2- that you don't forget your other fics. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2006
    Beautifully morbid! Thank you.
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  • From TrinityLayne on August 20, 2006
    sometime the dark side can be a good thing... this story is dark, but great. It is very well written.
    and something about dark!draco when it concerns Hermione is my total kink. please say you'll write a sequel. I am not about begging. :oP
    I have to know if Hermione ends up pregnant... and if she does, does she know at that point what Draco did. i soo need more of this tale...
    *begging,on hands and knee's here*
    awesume job, hope to see more
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  • From CrescentWitch on August 20, 2006
    I can't believe yo wrote that!!! That's so mean!!!!! I can't believe you!!!!!
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  • From ANON - darian on August 20, 2006
    This is not finsihed...you know that right? There has to be more, I have to know how Draco gets Hermione. I want to see Hermione's reaction to his "love" You have to add a chapter or 10...lol
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 18, 2006
    Well that was an amazing piece of work. I'm still sitting here, kinda shell-shocked. Draco was obsessed and a little wacko to go with it. I was a little appalled at his actions with his semen. A continuation of this could be very interesting because it could go many ways. She could find out and hex him to Voldemort and back...he could continue on and win her...she could show similar tendencies and pay back could be most enlightening...or he could continue doping her with the potion, he could become careless with the amount or she could build an immunity to it and actually wake up during one of his sessions. You can make this continue on the darkside or lighten it up and make it more traditional. I know where I would go on it. Ava, this is showin great scope as a writer...to be able to write this as compared to say, Future Parents' Program. Nice diversity. Either way, I liked your writing.
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  • From ANON - Kiwi on August 18, 2006
    Scary and disturbing. O_o Not one of my favorites... but still interesting. The only thing that kept me reading was your way with words.. your writing style, I like it a lot. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jules on August 17, 2006
    OMFG!

    While admittedly dark and scary I certainly could see Draco here. The push and pull of his out of control emotions are enthralling. I think you did a great job with Draco's POV. His conflict and inability to resolve it certainly pushes him beyond his limit.

    Awesome fic!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2006
    definently scary but seemed so possible. Great writing!
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  • From ANON - frog on August 17, 2006
    I love the story! so well writen. Please post a sequal about what hapens next! I have to know if hermione is preg and if so how will she ract(as she thinks she is still a vergin)? would Hermione make a deal with the headmaster to help the order? does she love Draco to but he just dosent know? Please post a sequal please.
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  • From ANON - dylan666 on August 17, 2006
    Compliment for the story! It was really amazing!!! However you can't leave us like this. I would like to read other chapters! Think about update a sequel
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  • From ANON - Avanell on August 17, 2006
    I loved this...but would also love for it to continue. Are you planning to? I hope so! I can just see Hermione being horrified yet eventually sucumbing to Draco. ??? And a jealous Ron wouldn't hurt ;)
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  • From ANON - Dylan on August 17, 2006
    Wow, talk about obsessed!
    Poor Hermione.
    Would like an epilogue, just to see her find out what happened and hex his family jewels off!!!!!
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