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By : avari20
  • From ANON - Kenda on August 17, 2006
    I like the fact that you didn't romantise it at all. It came across as creepy, as it well should considering what Draco was doing. Very well written and thought out.
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  • From Peaches79 on August 17, 2006
    I am a huge fan of your work as always. This was amazing, haunting, beautiful inspite of the act he commited. I am not generally a fan of non-con but I must say that this was executed so well..... I would be very interested to see where you could take this I think it has the potential to go beyond a one-shot in a very big way and there is definitely an audience for that type of darkfic. And while I don't agree with what he did in and of itself the way he loves her really moves me. D/Hr was my first pairing and while they remain my OTP the number of fresh stories out there seems to be dwindling, this is a cut above the rest.

    Jessi
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  • From ANON - Cara Morte on August 17, 2006
    Why be afraid to post this?! It was the best dark Draco fic I've read! You soooo have to write how Draco ensnares Hermione! That would be perfect! Please?
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  • From ANON - carolyn~ on August 17, 2006
    whoops!
    PS- I'm not sure if it is to yours, but to my delight it read like a prequel to something to the likes of "Her Silent Tears." In which Hermione is wonderfully loved by Draco who is driven by dark intentions. Where she is abducted and made to be his babies' momma.

    I don't know if you have read it but it's a good read of a similar, if not the same, topic.
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  • From ANON - carolyn~ on August 17, 2006
    I don't know what you were so scared about. I like to think that in truth, if a romance like of Draco and Hermione were to be, it'd have to involve something dark and amnesic; something that transcends the gravitas and veritas of the mundane. As it is, I thought it was written with great talent. A good job was done integrating his everyday hostile countenance with his passion, a little bit of which has been known to drive men to great heights. I'm glad that he couldn't hold back, if not only for the hot smut!, but also because Draco is eventually anything but prohibited.

    Definitely not cut and dry. =)
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  • From ANON - ameba on August 17, 2006
    it was scary... draco was out of himelf! i like to read about draco's dark side
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  • From ANON - The Galloping Doormat *GRIN* on August 17, 2006
    Okay my darling,

    FIRSTLY, *claps hands happily* You did a GREAT job here. I read it and it just keeps getting creepier and darker and more obsessive each time. I read again the Hermione part and I really think that there was this subtle implication that she was *very much* aware of what was going on during the whole incident. You can almost feel her as a second layer of awareness in the air, almost like she's a detached observer spiritually to what is happening to her physically. Anyway, that's what I got out Hermione's part. Interesting as she never does more than register a few subtle facial movements, but yet you STILL convey her emotions so powerfully.

    And, I've gotta say the most disturbing thing to me was that he was hoping to get her pregnant. The "Grow big for papa" thing gave me the shivers. I was like EWWWW. LOL And you KNOW how very much I adore Draco. For me to get creeped out, it takes a lot.

    I'm trying to remember all the things we discussed so that I can put them here for you to read anytime you wish..LOL. But, I think the most imporant thing that I came away with was the desperation and truly insane intensity in which his need for Hermione was. It was like a roaring fire that burns hot and bright and sucks up all the air around it..and what happens with hot, raging fires? They burn themselves out quickly. This is what I saw for Draco. His passion was so severe that I think it was destined to be his ultimate doom.

    As much as I desire a happy ending for Draco and Hermione, I don't think it was in the cards for these two.

    Job well done. Truly.

    Congrats, love.

    L
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  • From ANON - Roxanne on August 17, 2006
    Disturbing.

    But I loved it! I couldn't sleep tonight, so i figured I'd read some fanfiction. But I might have more trouble sleeping because of this! (but seriously, that's a good thing).

    It's got that disturbing qualities of a storyline like.. say that of One Hour Photo (if you've seen it). It's creepy, but you don't hate the character, because they seem so real and not like a monster.

    it's hard to explain.

    GOOD JOB!!
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  • From ANON - luna on August 17, 2006
    this story begs to continue...
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on August 17, 2006
    Ooooh, creepy Draco! That was good, I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Ayumi Koshiro on August 17, 2006
    Wow I really love this. It's just so so so believable I guess is the word for it. I love the way you made Draco, obsessive, uninhibited, but at the same time afraid. You gave this character great depth. I know you probably won't continue, but it would be brilliant if you did. 5 stars.
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  • From ANON - Amey on August 17, 2006
    First of all, this is one hell of a piece of work. I absolutely adore this, and you must, must, MUST continue this fic. A one-shot doesn't even come close to doing it justice. I for one like a little darkfic from time to time and this, for being essentially a rape story, actually sort of endears Draco to me, and I desperately want them to live fractured and happily ever after. Besides, their kids would be cute. Please continue this, do a sequel, something! I'm not above begging, haha.

    **And it's not like I don't love your other stories, just that this one is special. x3**
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  • From ANON - silveris on August 17, 2006
    Beautiful. I love this fic.

    Definitely reccing @ FT (http://forbiddentruth.gillyweed.org}
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  • From ANON - SlytherinsWench on August 16, 2006
    I was just telling Lorett that it really takes a good and talented writer to explore things that scare them, to let the story take them where it needs to go to be whole. This really did run the gamut of emotions both for Draco and the reader. I found myself raging at him, but yet, I could still identify with him, I could reason it out as he would. It was a great character sketch and really exemplafied his longings, his immaturity, but still that power that we sense in him. I'm glad you posted. XOXOX
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  • From ANON - T on August 16, 2006
    Oh my gosh, Ava!

    This stroy is AMAZING!

    Its so beautifully written, even though Draco is kind of delusional about Hermione.

    I would love for you to write more because this story could go so many ways.

    And I think the whole Draco trying to get Hermione pregnant is definetly a great
    finishing touch because in alot of other fan fictions you know Draco wouldn't want anything like that.

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more to this because its a nice, fresh new story and is very different.

    By the way I love off limits, but I haven't read Future Parents Program but I'll get around to it!

    I just adore your writng style so PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE CONTINUE!

    lOVE T

    WOW I LOVE THIS STORY!
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