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Reviews for Betrayed

By : eiriyukithewriter
  • From ANON - Solo on September 08, 2006
    Hey,
    It's looking good so far. I say keep going and I can't wait to see where it goes and if Harry will get revenge or not. Thanks for writing.

    Solo
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  • From ANON - anon on September 08, 2006
    it all goes kind of fast but otherwise is OK ^_^
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  • From ANON - Obsidian Phoenix on September 06, 2006
    I hope you continue this fic and update soon, I can see this becoming very good. So far you have a great plot that can be expanded upon in whatever direction you choose and still become an awesome story. I just hope you write longer chapters and if not maybe update with multiple ones. I am looking forward to reading more. Update soon.

    TL
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  • From Reamar on September 05, 2006
    Well, it felt really russhed. I ssuggesst you sslow down ssome. Even with it being russhed, I sstill want to read what happenss nexxt. Pleasse update ssoon.
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  • From ANON - orion on September 05, 2006
    well i like this so far! i like how harry found out about their betrayal. are any of his old friends still friends with him or do they not like him? how will he meet draco? will harry be the dom or the sub in the relationship(hopes that he is the sub). but yea up-dates soon please!
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  • From ANON - PyroSylph on September 04, 2006
    Great stroy, con't wait to see where you are going to take it
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  • From ANON - anon on August 18, 2006
    its a bit rushed, but otherwise OK ^_^ keep going with it
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  • From Reamar on August 17, 2006
    Well, thiss iss interessting. I cannot sstate an opinion until I read more, sso pleasse update ssoon.
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