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Reviews for Lament of Innocence

By : KamirineGoddess
  • From ANON - lilio on August 25, 2006
    more please
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  • From ANON - Shooting_Star on August 21, 2006
    I like! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - ChibiMaddiChan on August 21, 2006
    ...I'll put the flame thrower down. For now. But I'm watching you. And your little story too. So don't mess up. ((Glares at you))
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  • From on August 21, 2006
    Let me begin by saying I honestly didn't except much before I read this. I was actually going to flame it, given the whole premise. Harry having a twin has been done to death by so many authors and reading one story is like reading them all, as they usually have the same elements.

    So you'll understand my shock after reading this. You've managed, despite a minute number of grammar and spelling mistakes, to make a an intriguing well written story out of an overly used storyline. You've kept certain things the same, yet made subtle changes that ended up impacting the story enough to make it seem completely new.

    I for one, was willing to give you praise just for the way you portray Harry's parents in this story alone. I'm so happy to see that for once, they aren't the unloving parents that abandon Harry in favor of their other child just because said child may be far more special. Snape's involvement down right interest me, as well as how Harry himself with unfold as a character given the circumstances.

    I look forward to upcoming chapters you will write and press you to move onward. Your story is fabulous and I hope you continue.

    ~Bella
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  • From ANON - Draconis on August 20, 2006
    LMAO!!!!! That was so funny! Poor Ron! And all because Harry was bored! I'm interested to see how Harry and Draco will come together, and OMG what a horrible cliffhanger! Will there be a fight? A duel? Will James go all pyscho and try to rip out Snape's throat! You have to update, I can't wait to see the reaction, omg!!!!
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  • From ANON - Xiander's on August 20, 2006
    I'll read the next two chapters when I have more time but I gotta say, what you have is pretty good. Dumbledore's all manipulative but for a good reason. Though it's going to be interesting to see James and Lily's reaction when they realize what he did. Keep up the great work!
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