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Reviews for A Business Affair

By : roxierose13
  • From ANON - The Doctors In on September 05, 2006
    Dont give up the ship this story is just starting and I am sure that it will evolve. Less authors notes would allow the reader to get into the story and that could make a difference.
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on September 04, 2006
    It's Monday. I totally forgot. Anyways now that you've sufficeintly distracted me from writing I just have to say that I enjoyed that chapter. twas very nice. And I like the fact that you kept the Harry Draco confrontation short.

    Oh and as for Blaise, I've always imagined him as being Caucasian as well and I can't get that out of my head so I write him as so. But that's just the way I work, so it's nice that I can keep that picture in my head for your fic too.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2006
    I loved this fic! Isn't Blaise Black/Italian you know he could be both.
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  • From ANON - Alison on August 29, 2006
    Draco's the new owner? Oh boy! Harry best show up on time! hee hee =o)

    Do I have to wait 'til Monday??????????????

    Man! That's just not right!

    Great story though. =o)
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on August 28, 2006
    Loved it. Especailly Pansy. usually I hate Pansy on pure principle, especailly when her presence means that's Draco is a taken man but in this fic she's almost bearable.

    Anyways I love the fragile little thing of a relationship between Harry and Ginny and I most definitely love the fact that Draco is essentailly going to be Harry's boss, that has so muxh potential I won't even say.

    Anyways wonderful chapter, and thanks for making Monday a little bit more fun.
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  • From ANON - acr on August 28, 2006
    good chapter. Evil!Ginny is scary.
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  • From ANON - koryuu on August 28, 2006
    Oh my, married men XD. Its good so far, definitely has caught my attention. Keep up the good work, can't wait for next monday. =D
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  • From ANON - WrittenMatrix on August 25, 2006
    love it so far! really excited to read more! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on August 22, 2006
    Where's the rest? Update!
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on August 22, 2006
    interesting. You know I've always been a fan of your work. Though it's weird to think you've only been writing for a year. Anyways the idea is cool, adulterous if anything but I suppose that's the point. I can't wait to see where this is going and I rather do hope you update weekly. I loved it when it was every friday with ITC but I suppose mondays are bit more torturous than fridays so this would be a bright spot. Hope to see another update soon.
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  • From ANON - acr on August 21, 2006
    good start.
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  • From ANON - The Doctors In on August 21, 2006
    Seems to be off to a fair start. No complaints on the story writing and there is no need for me as a reviewer to point out anything in the context of your writing. Not interested if your in school or not, not interested in a chatroom with you, the only thing we have in common is the writing of this fictional story, as what you advertised in you summary. Have my own life and wont bother to burden you with that either. The Doctor.
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