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Reviews for A Long Way Back ~ Editing

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Chavela on October 31, 2006
    Chapter Eight!!!!

    OMG! Three of my most favorite characters to ever grace your stories, are gain in another one! *dies* Love them all!

    I can not wait to see what Adam does with Hermione! *giggle snort*
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 31, 2006
    Yes, Hermione IS annoying. lol. But as far as the OOCness, she would have to be in order to show how much she's been affected by killing Harry and living the kind of hermitic life she lives. Emotional turmoil, depression or breakdown does make people change their behavior...and recovery is realized when the original behaviors return. So, there you have it. :)
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 31, 2006
    Chapter Six:

    LMAO! Well Severus certainly knows how to get Hermione to do what he wants. He is so wonderfully sneaky! GREAT chapter.
    And my bad, I forgot to sign in on my last review, I hate Anon reviews.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2006
    Chapter Five:
    Hermione is actually very annoying in this one. Like you just wanna slap her. Kinda hard to read. And very OOC!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 31, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 31, 2006
    Chapter 2!

    That was intense. At first, I could not believe that Severus would kil her cat, I was shocked. I even thought, not even an evil Severus would waste his time to touch an animal. And here was or beloved Potions Master doing this.
    And then it came back. And that weas really cool. Severus... only he would use that as a tactic.
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  • From Ms_Figg on October 31, 2006
    veelamurmeli: I added Adam because I like him. Period. I didn't want to draw Hermione's physical improvement out too long, it would have been boring as hell to write and twice as boring to read IMO, so I used Adam and his beauty shop as a device. I'm sorry that the use of the character ruined your reading experience and you feel you can't go on with the story. It's frustrating to get into reading something and then...well nothing. A shame really. But you have a right to voice your opinion concerning my reuse of original characters, imagination, creativity or original plotlines. That's exactly why there is a review board. Thank you very much for your comments.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 31, 2006
    Prologue...

    Well... a talk. I can only begin to wonder where Severus is going to lead a talk with Hermione.

    This was a great start. Poetic in the downfall Hermione has built for herself. And not a truer statement has been uttered: and there is no judge more damning than one's own heart

    Wonderful start!
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  • From ANON - veelamurmeli on October 31, 2006
    unbelievable. this story started just fine until.. adam sweetmeats. why do you have to write him into every fucking story you have? well atleast almost every. it would have been more fascinating to see the change in hermione at a real pace not assisted by mister sweetmeats and his beauty parlor. it seems to me that you don't have enough imagination and creativity to have original plotlines in your different stories, therefore you use vashti and adam.

    i really liked the beginning of the story, the inner agony of hermione, the adventurer severus and his straightforward behaviour. but now i really can't finish this story because of your vampire fixation. i would have liked to know more about the elixir and the possible resurrection of harry but alas, it is now impossible.

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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 18, 2006
    xD I feel bad they never got to discover the Elixer's secret. Boo hoo.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 18, 2006
    AWWWW. Cute cupcake ending. See? No worries.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 18, 2006
    Sniff sniff.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 18, 2006
    The Shamans comment about arrows whizzing my Severus made me think of Indiana Jones and now I have this hilarious version of Indiana Snape going on in my head. Oh merlin. xDD
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 18, 2006
    I had a feeling Harry had got reincarnated as Ron's son!! Dun dun dun. Mr. Shaman please come along and fix things!!
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 18, 2006
    Awww pillow talk before the full monty. xD
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