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Reviews for Three's a Crowd

By : SilentSilhoutte
  • From ANON - LaLa on September 10, 2006
    A nice story but Draco and Blaise are out of character. There is no way Draco would talk to the headmaster like that...no matter how pure, powerful and rich he is. The Malfoys have a reputation to uphold. And Blaise is never aggressive toward anyone. He is sneaky and quit. Other than that the story is cool. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jess on September 10, 2006
    Update Soon, Update Soon, Update soon!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on September 10, 2006
    Are Draco and Blaise going to find some way to see Hermione in her outfit? I want Pansy's reaction, too :)
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  • From ANON - mnfm on September 10, 2006
    Definetely yes!
    I've been reading this story for a while, it was very good. Now is very, very, very good. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Karen on September 05, 2006
    I like how Hermione is always quoting specific rules and laws. Hermione's insult of Draco is also excellent. I can't wait to see Hogwarts reaction to Hermione's harem outfit!

    Crabbe and Goyle are not twins. Twins are siblings born at the ame time. Perhaps duo would be a better term?
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  • From ANON - T on August 30, 2006
    GREAT story so far!

    A few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing that reading over, or getting someone else to read over to make sure it makes complete and utter sense won
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2006
    please please update soon
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  • From ANON - Pastel on August 26, 2006
    Great story. It's fantastic. Does Blaise already know that Hermione is part of their group? Update please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2006
    Hi
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  • From ANON - Yokki on August 26, 2006
    Hello! ^^

    I really like your story, keep it up ^^.

    Hm, i have to say, after i read your bio, i was surprised that you were an asian. I'm sorry, but if you watch anime or listen to japanese or chinese music it isn't often i encounter ppl who is good at english. Well.. That goes for me too, i'm no good at english, well, i can't say that either because that would be lying.
    Anyway what suprised me more is that you mentioned because you were chinese/japanese, ppl wanted to get in touch with you and wanna be your friend. I don't know it it's only here but anyway i don't feel they want to get in touch with me because i'm an asian. Well.. i don't have a account anymore since januari because i don't write as often as i should so i closed it but in whole i don't get that impression, maybe it is your heritage of being japanese. Cause i am a chinese but live in sweden.. Maybe that is the reason but no one have ever asked me to tell about myself.

    Well.. Mostly, i think they are facinated that you are a japanese.
    Oh, sorry, i just babbling on and on. You may not even read this.. But it's ok.. I have said what i wanted to be said. And like the others.. It would be fun to have gain a new friend.

    Well take care and good luck with school!

    Wish you the best

    Yokki
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on August 25, 2006
    Wow. I feel sooooooo sorry for Hermione. She has two ignorant and spoiled brats to look after for. The poor girl!!!
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  • From ANON - hmmm on August 25, 2006
    Thanks for the explanation re your use of mudblood and muggle. It helped to explain your rationale for the use of the words. I enjoyed this chapter...Draco really is one confused puppy right now.
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  • From ANON - Hmmm on August 24, 2006
    Well, I liked your second chapter a lot. The characters seemed more realistic in their words and actions. I know this sounds nitpicky but Hermione is not a muggle but her parents are muggles or non-magical. The term used to describe her offensively is mudblood.

    Hmmm, Lemons, eh? Why do I have the delicious feeling that they will be Draco/Blaise lemons? Hmmm, : )
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  • From ANON - Hmmm on August 24, 2006
    I would encourage you to verify your facts from canon. Just a couple of things I noticed were: there is no eighth year, only seven for the students and N.E.W.T.S. are written in seventh year and not in conjunction with their O.W.L.S. which are fifth year. That would help tighten up your writing. I also was puzzled by the disrespectful attitude shown by Ron and Harry since they have great respect for Professor Flitwick. I could see them acting that way and saying those things about Snape but not Filius.

    You have the bones of a good story. You just need to check out your facts a little more carefully.
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  • From ANON - morwen_re on August 23, 2006
    gaw! you left it at a cliffie! you've got to update again soon or else i'll go mad! please? i'll give you a cookie if you update again soon!
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