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Reviews for What Must Be Done

By : savhanna
  • From ANON - Ethan Thorn on September 25, 2006
    well i must say both this nad what did i do are good stories however i am still a little lost on what happend. Last thing i knew draco was being killed and fred and george was rounding up people in there house. Well there ever be a part that will tell the readers what happend?
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 25, 2006
    Sorry, I've tried to stick it out but it's still too confusing and I'm no clearer on who everyone is,what the goal or plot of this is. I don't think I'll be reading anymore. Good luck with it.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 08, 2006
    I can't review because I'm too confused. Please start clearing some things up. Where is Draco? Is it Gryffindors who are torturing him in the prologue or Lucius? I thought in chapter 2 that it was Voldemort who killed Lucius. What did I do? ended with Harry and Draco together but this starts with Draco being tortured. Again I say I am so confused.
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  • From ANON - Shannon on September 04, 2006
    That was short, and didn't really explain anything..but i will still read it faithfully, update
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  • From ANON - KateL on August 30, 2006
    Harry's owl is named Hedwig not headwig... and it's are you deaf not def....this seems like it's flipping around quite a bit..for no apparent reason. Where the hell is Draco? Who was it that got beat up in the first chapter? Confusing, a little, your story is.
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  • From ANON - Shannon on August 30, 2006
    stillll confused!!!!im sorry but i honestly am trying to understand, but i guess i shall have to wait! keep going
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  • From ANON - Shannon on August 29, 2006
    im kinda confused, but i get the feeling i will start to understand as the story goes on. update please.
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  • From ANON - RD Wind on August 27, 2006
    I have NEVER left a negative feedback before. However, this story is VERY confusing. I enjoyed the first part "What must I do." To you it was "off track" but it was consistant and concise.

    I won't abandon your fic. I only hope that you will clean it up and realize that you are bouncing all over the place -- without connection. I didn't realize until the 5th chapter that they were on summer holidays.

    You are a talented author, but you need to figure out what you are going to do with this story FROM THE BEGINNING of it and go forward from there.

    Good Luck -- and yes, I will keep reading with the hope that I will be able to figure it out.

    --RD Wind
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  • From ANON - Shannon on August 25, 2006
    Hey! I don't know when you started this, but i just got into your stories recently, i've read scars, awesome stories, and i also like this one alot too! i hope you continue on with it, i find it extremely interesting!!
    Please, update!!
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