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Reviews for INSATIABLE

By : roozie
  • From ANON - GUEST on March 05, 2015
    First this story should come with a warning. The first or second chapter contains a rape scene. Lucius has sex with Hermione without her consent. So, I find it offensive that you didn't state this up front. That could bring up horrible memories for an assault survivor. So, shame on you for that! A horrible story.
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  • From anniea on October 10, 2009
    i just read all of insatiable in one sitting. it was good, hot at points, romantic at other times, but all in all a good story. however i think that you would get great PR if go back and update the chapters by separating where characters are speaking. try to keep a paragraph in between responses such as:
    "hermione will you accompany me to dinner tonight?"

    "I would be honored draco"..... also if you keep their names in the conversation it will help with other readers keep track of who is speaking. i had trouble writing conversations when i started and i still do but i found that this helps me a lot.
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  • From mlui on May 24, 2009
    I'm really sad that Draco died. He's terribly chivalrous and sweet. It's sad that he won't find love himself. I mean, he told Hermione he didn't want Pansy because she was hung up all over his father...but yet he marries Hermione who is in love with Lucius and pregnant with his child... Well, I guess he had to die in order for Lucius and Hermione to get married?? Anyways, I've enjoyed the story very much.
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on December 17, 2008
    *::crying::*
    I love a happy ending!

    Beautiful story.

    I love how passionately they (Lucius and Hermione) love each other.

    I was a bit bummed out about Lucius being on the Chastity potion, and then later his despondency causing him to almost take his life--Good God Gertie, talk about your emotional rollercoaster. Thank the gods that Hermione came back to talk to him, thwarting his attempted suicide, and offering him the love of herself and their baby. It was cute that they decided to named their little boy Draco Jr.

    I LOVE this story--BRAVO!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on December 17, 2008
    RE: chapters one through six

    Brilliant story--I love how passionate, sexy, dirty, naughty Lucius and Hermione are together! I would SO love to be Hermione, you know?
    ;~D

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 15, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on January 21, 2008
    brilliant! really really loved this story it was fab!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 11, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - witch06 on December 18, 2006
    Wow. A great story. I loved how it went from happy to sad and then back to happy - always changing. An awesome story!!! Great Job. Maybe a sequel?
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  • From ANON - *DB* on November 07, 2006
    awesome story i loved it, sad towards the end but loved the ending!!
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 07, 2006
    what with all the money and love they so need another baby or two.... well you get my point. so the question is are you going to be wonderfully generous and give us a sequel? I did so love this story it could not have worked out better and you wrapped it up so pretty, but i want more please ;)
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on November 05, 2006
    That ending was wonderful thanks for the glimpse into the future!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 05, 2006
    Great ending to a wonderful story! So sweet!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 05, 2006
    Awesome just awesome. and Awwwww I love the ending. I was so scared he was actually going to succeed in killing hisself. Thank god Hermione came back on time to catch him. Beautiful ending. I realy enjoyed reading this. and I have found a new appreciation and love for Lucius. thanks again for such a wonderufl story.
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  • From ANON - Lyssa on November 05, 2006
    that was so cute...i loved it...to the very end....bravo
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