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Reviews for The Power Of Blood

By : Snape26
  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From vonHardenberg on May 06, 2007
    Interesting turn on most of the fanfiction.
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  • From SidneyRae on March 17, 2007
    i like the way this is going, but one thing is confusing me. Hermione sent an owl home to her parents about the baby, i thought her parents were killed?
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 15, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.


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  • From ANON - lili on November 26, 2006
    Well, your story concept isn't bad, but there's very slow developement. You write alot about the physical events, but shortly state the mental changes. Hopefully you'll be able to edit in some emotional development.
    Also, a small thing that was bothering me.

    You spell the word raped "rapped". So every time I read "Snape rapped" I giggle, which I'm sure wasn't your intent. This is a good rough draft, but needs a little bit of work. Maybe a beta would help?
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  • From ANON - angel on November 25, 2006
    man i hope he talk to her soon .. hmm how will everyone take the news about ron's death ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Jamie Mione on November 19, 2006
    A good story, I will be waiting for more to be released.

    If you are still looking for someone to beta read, I could do it for you. Just let me know.
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  • From ANON - skye on November 18, 2006
    So...my question ( and I checked the other reviews first incase it had been covered..) Is Severus a werewolf or not?????? the first chapter ends with that tidbit, then a while later Remus arrives for "his" wolfsbane potion, but no mention of Snape needing it? Your doing good, you can do better, but remember, all us poor muggles who can't write a plot outline for a beer commercial, are enjoying the read!
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  • From ANON - amethyst on November 17, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this story. However, I wish you would correct a huge misspelling: rapped. Everytime I see this I wonder who has been singing rap songs to Hermione, or who has knocked her on the head (rap) or something. What you mean is raped the past-tense of rape, not that with the silent e, the double p is not needed.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 17, 2006
    Now Voldermort knows. ohh dear Poor Severus. And I wonder why he is avoiding Hermione? She seems so upset that he is.Cant wait for more. more please. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 17, 2006
    man .. who is the new spy ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Bella Snape on November 16, 2006
    Hello, and I like this story.

    BUT - Let me point something out...

    Hermione wrote home that afternoon telling her mother that she was expecting and what she was going to name him. She hoped that her parents understood why she was keeping the child and to at least send her some baby clothes so that she didn
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  • From ANON - angel on November 12, 2006
    wow mione is the heir the ravenclaw... hmmm i hope they can find out why dark lord really did it ...please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on November 11, 2006
    wow .. i hope remus and the other are ok .. im glad mione said those nice things to sev .. hmm maybe she should help him pick a name out for their son ... please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ....later for now

    angel
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