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Reviews for Distorted Exposure

By : IncessantDarkness29
  • From chantalmalfoy on July 24, 2007
    But of course Draco has to be a prick... he just wouldn't be Draco if he wasn't, eh? But I do hope he gets his head out of his arse quickly. lol.
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  • From Speir on July 24, 2007
    awesome fic cant wait to read more please update soon !!!!
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  • From railynn2001 on July 24, 2007
    Love this story, god I wish Draco would get over his fear and just let himself fall. I think you portray the characters so well and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From stasa on July 24, 2007
    Yeah, it's a common misunderstanding, 2 weeks always sounded to me more like a month....lol
    Just kidding, I wouldn't mind waiting for a year if that is how long it took you to wrap this story up the way you want it to :D
    The chapter was very good, it nailed Draco's character dead center. Can't wait for the next chapter, hoping to see Harry's pov on Draco's little... release... :)
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  • From KCRae on July 24, 2007
    mmm more more more. I can't believe Harry didn't help out. Wel i can I just wish he would have because then he could have forced Draco to listen to him. can't wait, hope to hear from you soon!
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  • From bananasforyou on July 24, 2007
    i loved it and wished it didnt have to end!
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  • From misslala on July 24, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter! :) Man, I can't wait to see what happens. I am scared that they will go their separate ways and never look back, but how can they both ignore it? What was Harry thinking as he watched Draco wank? Will he look for Draco after all of this os over? Will Draco talk to him without spiteful words and malice? Man so many questions!!! haha

    I love this story and can't wait for the end, even though it makes me sad to think of the end. Only three more chapters eh? Damn. Ah well, it's been a brilliant ride and I look forwrd to more. :)
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  • From ANON - Yami Bakura on July 24, 2007
    Chapter 22

    I was so excited to see the email notice from you that I had to come right over and read. It was all I could do to prop my eyelids open and absorb it all, because it's four in the morning and i'm feeling sleep-deprived. Anywho, I loved it! I'm glad that it's almost over in the same way that I wish it would never end.
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  • From ANON - billie on July 24, 2007
    That was so heartbreaking. I really love that chapter because now they're figuring out their feelings for each other.
    thanks for the update.
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  • From Zanica on July 24, 2007
    Still love this story, cant wait for the next update...

    I loved DH but I have to admit page 637 made me cry like a little baby lol
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  • From ANON - lingling on July 24, 2007
    NYA! I need more! *sobs* The thought of this being brought to an end makes me a little sad, but nonetheless, I will continue to read.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 24, 2007
    Oh how horrible! They both feel very similar! I've gotta have chapter 23!
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  • From ANON - Melinda on July 22, 2007
    When I first saw the link for this pariticular fic in anothers story (I think it's called Familiar or something like that), I honestly thought it would be alot tamer than this.
    Normally I'm not a person who reads stories with vivid sex scenes, but I have to say, you've put some rather sordid fantisies into my head. The plot of this story is believeable in a way that it makes me think about how fine a line there really is between love and hate. The way you described the sets, and the tension and emotion between then was beautiful. The sex scenes make me believe I can almost feel the emotion going on around them. Ren and Alex offset Draco and Harry well, in such a way that it shows that, without Ren and Alex, they obviously wouln't have slept together at all. A part that particularly grabs my attention is Draco and Harrys' reactions to the photos and how it suddenly becomes painfully obvious to the both of them just how in deep with eachother they were. The spelling mistakes were few and far between, and even though you've had to come back and edit it a few times you really have done an amazing job. If you actually created other characters to take the place of Draco and Harry, I believe you would actually be able to get it published once you've finished writing it. I can't wait for the next few chapters to be posted. Good luck with finishing this fic, and if you ever do take up writing as a career, or already have, good luck for the future : )
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on July 18, 2007
    Ahh! I love this story. I think it's my favorite H/D fic ever! I can't wait to see how it finishes out. I'm to the latest chapter, where they see their photos. Wonderful, wonderful story! :) Thanks so much for sharing it with us. If you have an update list, I'd love to be on it. :)
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  • From ANON - Ama on July 18, 2007
    Love it, love it, love it. Sorry RL has been so busy for you, but glad for my own sake that you are back. Can't wait to read the ending of this mesmerising story!
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