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Reviews for Distorted Exposure

By : IncessantDarkness29
  • From ANON - s.a on January 12, 2007
    Oh evil author please give back the hostage chapter! your loyal readers need it..... ;)

    (can't wait for the good stuff!)
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  • From ANON - Hazy on January 12, 2007
    Please write more i want to see what Draco is plotting!!!!!!

    *Hazy*
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  • From ANON - Stone_Sour on January 12, 2007
    this story is blood wicked!!!

    i wish Draco would stop being an arrogant jerk-off and let harry fuck him already!!

    when is more coming?
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  • From ANON - Gloria on January 12, 2007
    I really want start off by saying how much a fan I am of your story, how pleased I am that you updated, and how interested I am in the slight twist your plot is taking. Great, great stuff. In fact, I was sketching the other day and caught myself drawing the gothic stairway scene. The first ten chapters or so of your fic really took care to paint a very clear and aesthetic background and witty, tense, and fun-to-read characters and relationships between the grand total four of them. It's what really sucked me into the story. And then, all of a sudden, we get pulled into a few chapters of smut and mild angst. Loved it, really. I thought the story was really kicking off and I was enjoying it immensely.

    This past chapter has me a little concerned though. I did read your A/N and understand the need to cut the chapter in two. My concern isn't for the shortness of the chapter, really. It's the writing. It seemed very bland and almost lazy; especially when following Draco's third person. The run-on sentences and the brackets also seemed a strange shift your writing. Please understand, I'm truly a fan of the story and this is the only reason for me bringing my concerns to your review board. I trust that the rest of you story will be marvelous and cannot wait to read its continuation. I just...thought maybe you could use the constructive criticism.

    Again, thanks for the update and I look forward to more.

    ~Gloria

    P.S. Would it be possible to be notified of further updates via e-mail? My e-mail is shinigami_liason_nefie@yahoo.com Thank you in advance.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2007
    come on. SERIOUSLY. this is about the stories not the amount of reviews...
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  • From ANON - RabidSqurl on January 11, 2007
    You kept me up to nearly 3am. XD Very captivating and extremely hot. :D Write more! XD
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  • From ANON - Destiny on January 10, 2007
    this is THE best draco/harry fanfiction i have ever read , and trust me i have read a lot of them. so please put up more chapters and do you have any idea how many chapters theres going to be? please and thankz



    Destiny
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  • From ANON - Ali on January 10, 2007
    You're right - chapter 15 was pointless! But i'm really enjoying your story - the whole photo-shoot thing is something I havn't read before and it's great to read something unique. How long is the story going to be be?! I'm impatient and want things to happen fast!
    I like how we only really have four characters to concentrate on, as well as the animosity between our two spunks.
    Looking forward to the next chapter (and all the one's after that)!
    *offers chocolate to feed your inner muse and hopes it makes you right faster!*
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on January 09, 2007
    well... i had to reread a little, but now I'm caught up. Um, well I think Draco's plan probably won't work. You see, yours and my character personalities tend to be switched. In my stories, Harry's plan never works. In yours, it's Draco's. SO I see Draco's plan either backfiring horribly and throwing him into Harry's arms, or going so far badly that he'll leave and not get Harry at all. However, since Harry is feeling something for Draco, the latter is unlikely. Plus, that wouldn't be a nice ending to a fic, although realistic.

    Yeah, I'm about to get busy. School starts tomorrow and I spent most of yesterday on planes and in cars. It wasn't really fun, except that I finally had time to read Endymion Spring. It's supposed to be the new HP. Have you read it? But anyway, I've got a new roomate. She seems normal at least. Hey, do you have MSN messenger or AIM or anything?
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  • From ANON - arealdeal on January 09, 2007
    As much as I love it when Harry and Draco are together, I love it more when there is the tension that you have so perfectly crafted. Of course, in the end they must be together, but then you don't strike me as the evil type, so on with the story!!!
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  • From ANON - lingling on January 09, 2007
    ohmigod! Draco is such a little evil bastard! But we love him, chu. And yes, update as soon as possible!!! I can't wait! And congrats with all of the success with your fic.
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  • From ANON - nixie on January 09, 2007
    UPDATE SOON!

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2007
    PLEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSE update! p.l.e.a.s.e.
    i'm sure you have enough reviews by now! everyone loves your story :D
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  • From ANON - erotic*chaos on January 09, 2007
    oooh, you are sneaky! ok, so here it is: I'm really enjoying this story, (b/c it's great!) so if you could update at lets say the beginning of next week...that would be awsome! Great plot, i adore it, and love the tension right now! Can't wait to see how Draco's plan unfolds, something is bound to go awry!
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  • From Wicabeth on January 09, 2007
    Ah, sexual tension =)
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