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Reviews for Distorted Exposure

By : IncessantDarkness29
  • From ANON - Kayo on December 15, 2006
    YES! That was hot, this whole fic is great. I love the tension, I absolutely do! And I love chapter 13 the most....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me more are on the way. Like that chapter I mean. Do we ever get to see Harry really top Draco??? Please? With a cookie? Fantastic work.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 14, 2006
    Gorgeous story. The seting is amazing and the sexual elements are to die for. I'm looking forward to more, so update as soon as you can!

    -Ash
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  • From ANON - lingling on December 14, 2006
    my email: misha1137@hotmail.com Please send me updates! I fucking love this story so much!!! f
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2006
    woowwww. fuck, one of the best stories I've read in a while. Me thinks some writers should read this as a model of how to avoid some of the common mistakes/pitfalls I find in stories. Like listing. Listing out the details of a persons apperance and using a lot of "-ish" in the descriptions. 'long-ish hair'. And the body being just a little tonned. Basically the art of working the details into the story properly so that the whole thing flows more and becomes so wonderfully enjoyable to read.
    Buuuut maybe this is just me. And yes I know I've got a lot of spelling errors, I'm just cool and can't spell for shit like that. ^_^
    But seriously, quite looking forward to the rest of the story
    ::squeals::
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  • From ANON - Shardae on December 14, 2006
    Add soon...
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  • From ANON - Blackcat16 on December 14, 2006
    OMG!!! This story is so freakin good. Chapter 13 was hot!! I loved the way is was delivered. You HAVE to keep going. I have read a lot of Harry/Draco stories but it's hard to find a real good one like this. Keep up the GREAT work!!
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  • From ANON - tehlibbyness on December 14, 2006
    Perfect! I love how Draco wants it but doesn't and then Harry, despite all his lust, still pulled away at the right moment to spite Draco and make a point. yay~
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on December 14, 2006
    i hate you. for many reasons (none of which are valid). 70 reviews?! gah *dies* my god. well... i'm just gonna stop writing now and crawl into my little hole and try to study...

    why else do i not like you? oh yeah, because of that stunt you just pulled! ha... you're learning something from me at least ;) how to write a decent cliffhanger, lmao! Although, I understand that Harry is "Potter" in this fic because it's from Draco's perspective, but it's bothering me, lol. I'd rather he be Harry.

    Um... i can't really think right now. my brain is fried from finals and i've still got more. J'avais mon examen de francais aujourd'hui! yeah.. oh, and you'll be proud of me, or maybe you won't considering we don't know each other very well (we should remedy that), but I told someone.. about fanfiction... MY fanfiction. I haven't told anyone in the entire 1.5 years I've been doing this. The secrets out (at least to one person). She didn't freak out. SHe actually wanted to read some...

    okay, so I need to go to bed and finish packing to go home, and study more. study study study! god,how I hate college. :)

    Oh, and yeah, you need to type that thing up. If you do it soon, I could do it over the xmas break. I've got 3 weeks to do whatever the hell I want :)
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  • From on December 13, 2006
    very nice! i like it. do keep it up plz, i'm rooting for u. :D
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  • From ANON - Yanic on December 13, 2006
    Wow Harry totally pulled one over on Draco, unexpected but very good. Now of course they just have to have sex. There's too much tension otherwise, lol great chappie!
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  • From ANON - ScorpioPhoenix on December 13, 2006
    Oh, my...how sexy was that?? How delicious...
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  • From ANON - BoMama on December 13, 2006
    oohhh! i love this story. and that last chap was....wow...amazing...yummy.i love it! so, when is the next update? i hope soon! i love it!
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  • From ANON - kumori on December 13, 2006
    WOW. this was a good chapter. you did a great job on it. and i'm happy that you got 70 reviews for your last chap. and i do hope you can find the time to up date soon.
    please e-mail me when you have.
    purple_pegacorn@msn.com

    kumori
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  • From ANON - katie on December 13, 2006
    i like how disoriented draco was in this chapter. i laughed when harry just walked away.
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  • From MasochisticAngel on December 13, 2006
    Well, this is getting really good. Update soon, dammit! I guess Christmas is still a little while away but come on and update already!!! I really really liked it. Draco's character is almost right on the money and Harry is almost too hot to function. Very good job so far. Now let's get some more!

    ~Kyle
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