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Reviews for Distorted Exposure

By : IncessantDarkness29
  • From Wicabeth on September 28, 2006
    Hee hee, Draco's starting to come around and he doesn't even know it! *^-^*
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  • From ANON - Ann on September 28, 2006
    Very interesting story. I love the tension in the characters.

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  • From ANON - Jeni-chan on September 28, 2006
    Ooooo....sexy. ^^ I could feel the tension, amazing. Loved it, loved it, loved it.
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  • From ANON - aki on September 28, 2006
    o_O possesive draco = hot draco lol
    I love how you portray their personalities so than for the updaye and I can't wait for the next one
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  • From ANON - mphoenix on September 28, 2006
    oh my gosh...... he's going to figure it out!! *dances*
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  • From ANON - DraculUnknown on September 28, 2006
    I've read it and here is the review! lol! I love it, the little "thing" between harry and draco,whatever it may be, was so good! umm...does that make any sense? hehe i guess not! but hopefully you will understand anyway! I love this! Keep going! Cant wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - breakthesilence on September 28, 2006
    First your note on them not being able to use magic at anytime for anything. One of the advantages to writing about a school, JK didn't have to worry about that, there were clearly limits. They were trainees if something didn't happen you just assumed it was because they couldn't do it, much more challenging when they're older, and you have to set some line to what they can and can't do with their powers. Your explanation makes sense, so absolutely no complaints.

    Not to feed your ego, but probably to make you write the next chapter this story is amazing. The part I hate about writing is getting from the idea to each word, but you divulge just the right amount, and are willing to a go a couple chapters without too much action if you need to. Only the smallest complaints on grammar and the odd sentence that just doesn't sound natural.

    So go now put down chemistry or whatever you're working on (or are supposed to be working on and took a break from to read reviews) and write the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kermit on September 28, 2006
    Excellent!!! Update soon. I can't wait to see what will happen.
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  • From SlashySnitch on September 28, 2006
    Nice. Can I be on the Update list? blue_clay_bubbles@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - anon on September 28, 2006
    wow! dracos's got some issues! ^_^ update soon!
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  • From ANON - hakkyou on September 28, 2006
    I really like this story!
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  • From ANON - j.s. on September 28, 2006
    Great chapter! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on September 28, 2006
    *wide grin* Oooh... poor poor Draco. *snickers* It's obvious to all except himself.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on September 28, 2006
    Ooh, well done again!
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  • From ANON - spangles on September 28, 2006
    yes!yes!yes! i'm in love with this, the tension is great...i can't decide if i want them both to give in and start fucking or keep up the hellish UST!.... *sigh*
    updates...im living off the updates
    kisses xoxo
    spangles
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