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Reviews for Serpent's Bite

By : SilentSilhoutte
  • From ANON - dracosveela on November 02, 2006
    OMG, must have more, please tell me you are not going to leave the story there. That is cruel and unusual punishment. Very Slytherin....
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  • From ANON - Katharos on October 29, 2006
    NOOOOO! It was just getting good and you cut it off! Oh, pleasepleasepleasePLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - Diva on October 12, 2006
    Excellent chapter. Cannot wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Dragonero on September 27, 2006
    A very good start! I wonder what hermione will do now? Will she accept her fate once snape has marked her? Please, update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - LaLa on September 25, 2006
    What site met her. What did she see in the room? (well, obviously Snape) How can you leave such a cliff??? UPDATE NOW I SAY!!! NOW!!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 15, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - cedar on September 15, 2006
    pls update!!!!!!!!!!:) i am straving for the chapters!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Karen on September 05, 2006
    Very good and interesting first chapter. Neville being a naked molerat is funny.

    Your English is excellent, but you should get a beta to proofread for minor mistakes. "infact" should be "in fact", "whimp" should be "wimp", and Severus has many pints of blood in him, so a half pint of Veela blood would not be correct. Perhaps you should say half his genes instead?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - cherie on September 01, 2006
    I need more!!!! Pretty please?!!! This is great so far. I can't wait to see what all happens.
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  • From ANON - zoe on August 30, 2006
    interesting start I look forward to reading more
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  • From ANON - MagicalAngelForever on August 28, 2006
    OOH! Update soon! Very interesting so far.
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on August 28, 2006
    lets hope shes part cat shes gonna need those nine lives
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  • From ANON - Miepje on August 27, 2006
    Snape as a Veela? Sounds very interesting. I'm looking forward to see what will happen.

    And what does Hermione see at the end of the chapter? Can't wait to find out. More please?!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn on August 27, 2006
    Promising start I hope you keep going! :)
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