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Reviews for Serpent's Bite

By : SilentSilhoutte
  • From ANON - PAMELA WILLIAMS on August 26, 2006
    Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - tiro on August 26, 2006
    Hey, for English being your third language, you have done a good job thus far with this story, though there is a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes, but not that bad...many native speakers who post here sometimes make many more mistakes than you have done. Your story is interesting, not many people have written a Veela story about the SS/HG ship. I'd like to see what you have in store for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Randomized-Data on August 26, 2006
    Interesting, i can't wait for ze next chapter.
    This intrigues me.
    Fyi Dumbledores' Sherbet Lemonsare are NOT pastries, they are in fact hard boiled sweets.
    Other then that, well done ^^
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  • From ANON - Bella Snape on August 26, 2006
    Thank you for the start of a new, and very imaginative, so far, Hermione/Snape fic. Well done, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - FiaBerns on August 26, 2006
    Nice story with a good premise. The only problem I had was in your description of Dumbledores' Sherbet Lemons, you described them as pastries, when in fact they are a hard boiled sweet or a bon-bon. However you could change them to be lemon tarts, which are a pastry. Well done and good luck with the rest of this story, I look forward to reading more. Fia.
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  • From ANON - cat on August 26, 2006
    interesting start. please continue I am interested in seeing how it will unfold
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  • From ANON - Edania on August 25, 2006
    hmm a little werid but i like it.Sounds like a sexy snape tale.
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