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Reviews for Because He Loves Me

By : lostinthought
  • From QuicksilverDM on October 24, 2011
    this was such a waste of time; completely ooc, no character depth, horrid dialogue and a plot that makes no sense at all...
    made me cringe all the way through
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 17, 2010
    Wow! I'm floored. Draco knew about Lucius but was cheating himself. He killed himself in the end. I'm guessing because he never really got over Harry? Or he figured he let happiness go....
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  • From xhedwigx on May 06, 2008
    This is gr8 & awesome.
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  • From DarthKitsune on October 10, 2007
    I Loved it. The ending was kinda sad, but it fit right in with the tone of the story, thanks for writing this!!!!
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  • From on September 13, 2007
    Loved it
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  • From ANON - Nichole on September 17, 2006
    wow that was the GREATEST piece of harry/lucius fan fiction i have ever read(and trust me i've read alot).although i must admit i was so shocked in the end when draco killed himself.i really wasn't expecting him to do that.it was the perfect sad/new begging endding.
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  • From ANON - Zetsuki on September 05, 2006
    Omg... I'm almost crying! SO SAAAD! A bit strange i must admit, but really good! ^_^
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  • From ANON - purrfus on September 03, 2006
    Interesting. It seemed to come apart at the end, almost as if you weren't really ready to finish it.
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  • From ANON - Briar on August 29, 2006
    that was so sad....
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  • From ANON - momoko on August 29, 2006
    good chapter, bye
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  • From ANON - acr on August 28, 2006
    This story makes no sense. EVERYBODY is totally OOC. If Harry loves Lucius, why is he sleeping w/Draco? If he cares about Draco at all, why keep a secret like this for years? Draco didn't notice the guy he was sleeping with was pregant? Why hide the pregnancy from draco anyway? How would a kid Emily's age keep a secret like that? Draco never heard her call Harry 'mama'? Why would Narcissa a) put up with that, and b) not tell Draco, her son?
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  • From ANON - helena on August 26, 2006
    Very good i love my harry and lucius together and eight children brilliant. Harry always wanted a big family.And draco what a nerve calling harry a whore and there he is busy screwing another guy what a git.Harry and lucius are so hot together.I hope you are going to write more stories about my gorgeous guys as a i only read about them as a couple and definitely no threesomes.
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  • From ANON - Echo on August 26, 2006
    Nice fic although I think it could have been a great fic with more depth and character development. As it is it's more like an interesting plot summary. More in depth flashbacks or chapters of how Lucius and Harry got together, what lead Harry to decide to date Draco while sleeping with Lucius, if he agonized over it. How Draco's jealousy ultimately caused him to cheated on Harry as revenge and to self-destruct. Give the reader more detail on relationships between Harry and Lucius, Harry and Draco, Draco and Lucius, Harry and his daughter, as well as Draco and his half-sister instead of just glossing over them. This is not a flame I just think you have great ideas and should develope them into great stories. Keep working on it. ^_^
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  • From calmchick on August 26, 2006
    I liked Harry/Draco pairing. But I thought Harry was being hypocritical when he got upset with Draco for sleeping around. When he's been fucking Lucius for years. Overall it was a good story.
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