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By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    Chapter 45!

    Yes, baby. I can feel it and I know you feel it too. I've finally found you, wife. You're not leaving here until you accept me
    That part was so hot! Someone say that to me! GUH!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    Chapter 43!
    I am not really a huge fan of the weasley's, just Fred, Bill and Charlie! But I still got really choked up over Percy coming home. It was very sweet!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    This story is just the best!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    Chapter 40!

    Lord that was so sexy. I could not believe it when Severus started to suck on her breasts to feed. That was just the hottest thing I have ... GUH!!!!! It was SOOOOOO sexy. I can not get over it.

    PEACE♥
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    Chapter 31!

    *sob* I had to keep wiping my eyes just to finish this chapter. Oh my God... I was so floored with this... I am so speechless and really you have turned me all emotional with this one.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    Chapter 26!
    Guh! I would dance with Severus any day!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    CHAPTER 25

    "I always will be until you turn me away."
    *SQUEE* That was the best part! So damn sexy. I wish Severus would back me into the wall and say that. Lord, how fast I would jump on him.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 19, 2006
    CHAPTER 21!

    Talk about tears. OMG... that was so sad. And then she asked him not to leave... wow...
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 18, 2006
    Chapter 8!

    Hermione lay there in the bed, staring blankly at the ceiling as self-recrimination piled on her chest, making it hard for her to breathe. But it wasn't her chest that was heavy, it was her heart.

    Good! I can not believe that Hermione would be so heartless to Severus. And ruin what they had... UGH!
    This story just keeps getting better and better.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 18, 2006
    Chapter 6!

    Yes! Let Severus use that brilliant mind of his. Hermione was healthy, there was no other way to have had their child die. I know Severus will figure it out very soon. He has to. He is too smart not to.

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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 18, 2006
    Chapter 5!

    I KNEW IT! I fucking knew it! I knew Voldemort had something to do with the misacrriage. Though I had no idea Bella was involved... But damn it I I knew it! I hate Bella!

    I hope they get there. I am on to more chapter!
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  • From ANON - Morticia Heartless on October 04, 2006
    Correct me if I'm wrong, BUT, Argus Filch was born on July 31, 1949. His parents defied Voldemort three times by not killing their 'SQUIB'son. Argus did have powers the Dark Lord didn't know about, he understood muggle firearms and medical compounds. Knowlage is power. Argus is a hero, will always be a hero, so all you doughters GET OVER YOURSELF.
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  • From ANON - Morticia Heartless on October 01, 2006
    I knew that old squib was part Gryffindor. May God Help Bella because Argus is going to rip her a new one. Good story by the by.
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  • From ANON - Claudia on September 29, 2006
    Once again a wonderful written story. I had so many laughters, I enjoyed having Eli in the story, I enjoyed the lemons (as in every other story) and I especially enjoyed reading something about Ginny and the others. The Weasley family dinner was fantastic. And I have to admit some tears as I read Percys homecoming.
    WONDERFUL !!!!
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  • From ANON - Missy on September 20, 2006
    ... I am not a Ginny fan, not in the least bit and yet i liked this story. I was decent, i mean the beginning made me cry, I was bawling for hours. I had lost a child when I was younger so I know Hermione
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