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Reviews for You Promised It Would Be Forever - Edit

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Colleen on July 05, 2011
    I loved it, I've a few of your other stories and checked out 'The Burning Pen.' Unfortunately at this time I've fallen on a very tight budget, one of these days though I will get the money to check out your other work, I always love a good sexy story. And while I might not always review I will continue to read stories and probably love every last one. You do very good work, please keep it up, I enjoy reading very much and as of late you are the only author I'll be reading.
    Sincerely,
    Colleen
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  • From luv2cusmile on December 27, 2008
    another thing i completely love about this story: how hermione and snape's and pervical and ginny's romance started out completely opposite. i kind of wish ginny and percival's romance could have weaved in with the story of snape and hermione. i can definitely relate to ginny. i would never just let someone just sweet talk me and fall for you. you would have to work for it!! i loved both couples in their own ways though. i truly enjoyed this story! it took up about 3 days of my life even when i went out of town i made sure i had a connection to the internet. amazing job!!

    p.s. something i observed that i think can easily be fixed: when a person is talking especially in long paragraphs that are broken up you omit the quotation mark at the end of the first paragraph to show that in the next paragraph the same person is still talking. for example:

    "blah blah blah...
    ...blahblahblahblahblah.

    "blahblahblahblah
    blahblahblahblahblahblah
    blah."- this quotation mark signals the end of their little speech.

    i hope that helps. it was just something that irked me.
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  • From luv2cusmile on December 25, 2008
    hah an annulment of a divorce... do they really have that? still cool though!
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  • From luv2cusmile on December 25, 2008
    OMGOSHHHH!!!!!! at first i was like he is so going to marry her again then i was like oh no i really don't think he is because he was seriously pushing her away then he slid the ring on her finger. OMGOSHHH!!!! i could cry right now. if i saw this in theatres i'd be an emotional wreck i tell you!! the romance in this story is so awesome and original. I LOVE IT!!!
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  • From luv2cusmile on December 24, 2008
    i am entirely in love with how you have hermione and severus returning their feelings for each other once again. it is sooo romantic.
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  • From ANON - Steph on December 22, 2008
    Awesome story! Loved every chapter, and just spent the better part of a day reading it in its entirety. I shall be on the look out for your next story Ms Figg!
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  • From ANON - mia madwyn on December 14, 2008
    I wondered how you were going to make this story last 45 chapters when they knocked off Voldy so quickly, but you did it admirably. An angsty beginning ended up with a delightful ending. Good story, start to finish!
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  • From ANON - mia madwyn on December 14, 2008
    Usually Ginny is the one who is all about makeup and lingerie. I like this Ginny.
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  • From ANON - mia madwyn on December 14, 2008
    Yes, Percy's return made my eyes leak. :)
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  • From ANON - mia madwyn on December 14, 2008
    You're so right about writing angst taking a lot out of a writer. In my case, I had three or four chapters of CoMC that took me a month each to write. They were long, but also so intense. It was really difficult.

    I'm loving this story!
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  • From ANON - mia madwyn on December 14, 2008
    You rock! Filch! I love the way you plot. And Filch got to be the hero.
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  • From ANON - mia madwyn on December 14, 2008
    Wow, I have never read this story and you have me hooked!
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  • From ismene5 on October 11, 2008
    Just read chapter8
    Miss Figg you are such a great writer. How you have managed Hermione seeing clear again.
    Wonderful.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 07, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From smmz79 on August 06, 2008
    HA HA omg i am laughing so hard at the part with severus trying to kill sybil... that is sooo funny i can just see his face when hermione told him to stop bc it was sybil and then severus being like oh hell i am going to be free of her... that is sooo funny!!!!
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