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Reviews for Lucius Malfoy's Second Wife - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From LCGrabski on August 07, 2008
    I must say you never fail to impress and might I add that I adore your avatar. That smirk makes it all the funnier.
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  • From gweasley on May 11, 2008
    Wow that was great!! I loved the story, I was sad to see it end. I was kind of hoping that Narcissa and Draco would come back at the end of the war and meet the new Mrs. Malfoy Draco's little brother. Anyway great job :)
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  • From ANON - Sophie on March 30, 2008
    Great story,you truly have a gift for writing, not all people can write this type of scenes without making them tacky but you did it. congrats

    Au revoir
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  • From ANON - skydancer on January 09, 2007
    Wow, that was beautiful. This is the first story of yours I have read ( I see you all the time reviewing, so I finally clicked on you..) Olivia was a fantastic character and you balanced Lucius wonderfully. Thank you! Skye
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  • From ANON - purrfus on September 23, 2006
    Chapter 6 - I found this story by reading reviews for Lucius and the Waif. And while I am glad I stopped to check it out, I have to go do homework or else. I don't think the project group would accept fascination with your story as an excuse.

    I'll be back to finish the story as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on September 09, 2006
    Thank you all for the reviews. I agree with "Water" that it was rushed at the end. I was starting to feel that 25 chapters was getting a bit long. I will take the comment to heart and not worry so much about length. My stories tend to be long so I can develop more complete characters and concepts. I think I'll stick with what I'd really prefer to write and not try to truncate to stay in a certain length. Thanks again to all.
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  • From ANON - water on September 08, 2006
    I liked your concept and style, but in the end, it got a bit rushed.
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  • From ANON - Mistress Vamp on September 08, 2006
    Not the way I expected it to end, but I liked it none the less! *grins* You did good with the story. I enjoyed it greatly. Sequel in mind?? ::MV::
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  • From ANON - as on September 06, 2006
    good story ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mistress Vamp on September 04, 2006
    Ok. Normally, I'm not into this kind of fic, but you have me interested. I read all 17 chapters at one go and I am very eager to read more. Please update when you can!!!! ::MV::
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  • From ANON - susan on September 04, 2006
    This is a really great story. I can't wait to see where you take this in the future. Thanks for an orginal story
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  • From MidnightLilly on September 04, 2006
    Great Fic, write more.
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  • From ANON - Esmeralda on September 03, 2006
    welcome to the neighborhood love :) I like the empath theme here... and my lovely Lucius mmmmmm. When I read he needed to have more children I practically screamed I'll have your babies!!!!... keep up the good work :)
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