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Reviews for Lucius Malfoy's Second Wife - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - blacky on May 29, 2013
    hey,
    i am back ;)
    cutting myslef some slack from studying i finished this story today.
    reading three different stories from the same author in a short succession is very interesting, because you find similarities and differences.
    just from reading this i guess this is one of your ealier works? it is not meant as an insult, i just think, that some parts appear kind of rushed in the description if i compare it to "beyond the veil" for example.
    i liked your idea and writing very much, though i would have enjoyed a more socially active Livvy... i cant imagine someone like her to adapt this drastically to being a living dead in a big empty house. and her imagine her talents might have been great assets in business.
    i loved the scene at the gala, where she met dumbledore and mcgonagall, i really wanted a visit to hogwarts to happen. some father-son bonding would have been my personal perfect happy ending...

    wow, i managed to sound totally negative! Not intended.
    the second wife was a really nice story, and olivia quite the interesting character, but after reading beyond the veil and... prisoners of love (hope i remembered the title correctly) i guess you set yourself some high standards for comparison ;)

    thank you for sharing
    blacky
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  • From ANON - blacky on May 28, 2013
    uh, usually i am too lost in the story to review (i know i am a bad person)
    but as i have to go now anyways, i thouht i up your review statistics by saying: i so love the beginning and i am sure i am going to have a new favourite fanfiction!

    an empath... was there something specific that sparked the idea? sometimes i get nervous with many people around me or just with people who are emotionally charged. it makes me cranky and want to run. do you know this kind of feeling yourself?

    good night,
    blacky
    (cu tomorrow... )
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  • From purefaith91 on October 07, 2011
    I don't get the problem here. If she had been using it against him for her own benefit, I might better understand him feeling betrayed, but she did not do that and she "saved" him while he was in prison. Of course I don't understand her guilty feelings. If anything, you would think that she would have to be home schooled to prevent her from emotional overload on a daily basis, not because she is doing anything to someone else. Lucius needs to remember the whole "people who live in glass houses" as he is way worse than anything she could have done with her gift. p
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  • From purefaith91 on October 07, 2011
    Very good! Lucius is not painting a picture that gives him ANY redeeming qualities, is he? I think if I were her, I would run for the hills (no matter how good in bed he is). Typical that he would only see himself "in hell" for five years when she is forced to lose that part of her life also unless she dumps him, which I bet he never considered, being a Malfoy and all. Very interesting. p
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  • From smmz79 on April 14, 2009
    great fic i loved it i really liked olivia she was very strong willed but that is a must with lucius
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  • From smmz79 on April 14, 2009
    wow i had a funny feeling he would take that bad... lucius seems to have the tendency to run when things get overwhelming for him....
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  • From smmz79 on April 14, 2009
    i really like this story so far i am glad that olivia is standing beside him i hope that he remembers that when he finds out about her little gift
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  • From smmz79 on April 12, 2009
    wow i like the wat that you have written this from olivias pov and you did not delve into the war....
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  • From smmz79 on April 12, 2009
    wow very interesting dumbledore was always so intuitive great chap
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  • From smmz79 on April 11, 2009
    holy crap does lucius have a temper or what... great chap and i am glad that he knows her true feelings now
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  • From smmz79 on April 11, 2009
    oh wow so what is going to happen now that was an interesting chap... i wonder what olivia will do to get out of her room
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  • From smmz79 on April 11, 2009
    i like olivia she is blunt and i think that is good with lucius because someone soft spoken would be lost with him.... so she asked about the tattoo hmm i wonder how long it will take her to figure it all out
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  • From smmz79 on April 11, 2009
    hmm so lucius is starting to notice his feelings and maybe a little bit of hers as well and it seems to be confusing him great chap i hope olivia can tame lucius or maybe not tame him but be able to flow with him... you know how he likes to control everything
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  • From smmz79 on April 11, 2009
    wow this is beginning to get very interesting i am very interested in olivias talent great job and wonder how lucius will handle the news when he finds out
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  • From smmz79 on April 11, 2009
    wow i am very interested in this fic the first three chaps have caught my interest... i thought i was going to start beyind the veil this one caught my attentione i have never read a lm/ofc before... very good
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