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Reviews for To Have and To Keep

By : MontanaDan
  • From xikum on May 08, 2008
    Why do I keep thinking 'Polyjuice' whenever Montague/Montgomery is mentioned? Hmmm... And now, with the pain not occurring when Harry is with Severus, but occurring whenever he is touching others in a sexual/sensural way - makes me think of some type of bond? But, then, why would Dark Magic help it - and this time, the cursed frame seems to have worked differently than Dark magic had in the past? And too, wonder to whom that other woman (the quasi-witch shop assistant) was referring? And so, so glad that at least part of the time, Harry seems to finally be beginning to buy a clue. Unfortunately, he appears to need to buy a bushel of clues. Hmmm.... so very much to consider here! Love it all to bits, and eagerly awaiting anymore that may come!
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  • From alma on April 17, 2008
    Yay!!!! you updated. Good chapter.
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  • From genna on April 17, 2008
    Good Story.

    I'd prefer it if Lucius didn't get hurt, Harry takes the Status Quo spell off the antique shop, Grant is NOT Zabini, and Snape is the one who is pregnant this time.

    Either way you do it, it is rich well woven tale.
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  • From ladybutterflyy on April 16, 2008
    *Twist one ankle behind me and look cute*

    Montana, I have a quick question? Why torture Lucius so much? Doesn't he deserve happiness too?


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  • From dominique1 on April 16, 2008
    so happy your back
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  • From cravedom on February 22, 2008
    You are back! I have enjoyed this series from the beginning and feared it was abandoned. Instead of just reading the recap I went back and read the whole thing and do have to say that it was as enjoyable as the first time. Your characters are well rounded; nobody is too evil or too good. I hope you continue this story. cravedom@yahoo.com
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  • From alma on February 15, 2008
    Yay, you updated.
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  • From antipyro on August 08, 2007
    Great chapter! It's so special that Severus and Harry got back together again. Too bad Harry isn't ready to deal with it just yet. I hope he sheds this excess baggage and realizes what's best for him. Great writing - as always. Thanks for the notification.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 16, 2007
    please keep me posted when you update at poohnation74@yahoo.com, thank you
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  • From Faschmer on June 16, 2007
    This story is bloody brilliant, but I feel kind of bad for Lucius though... I hope he hooks up with someone, so that he can get over Harry. Maybe Bill??? Poor Harry, he never gets a break, and Severus who don't understand when to back of. Snape is soo cute in this story ^^
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  • From Darkless on June 08, 2007
    Excellent! Angsty!! Oh Yeah... *sigh* More please. Thank you.
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  • From alwaysariyana on June 08, 2007
    Nice work although slightly confusing. Please update soon.
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  • From Jicky on February 06, 2007
    omg it took me all weekend, but very worth it XP i read from the beginning all the way from "To Have and To Hold" then "To Have Not". i think Lucius is just a tad obsessed, no? (you think!?) lol =P i like how u wrote Harry and Sev. it's very realistic and just so enjoyable to read. oh i think Bill is quite true to character as well. thou i dun think i like Grant (was it?) he's too flirty touchy. LOL (ps. the ending of 1st ch, he has to pay? i'm confused. pay as in evil kill-you way or sneaky molest-you kinda way?) it's quite sad that Harry lost the babies, but it's nice to know that there's true feelings and love btwn him n Severus. i understand where Sev's comin from, with the whole "set him free" thing, but gosh just makes me wana smack him a few times XD i wish Harry would be recuperating in Severus' rooms @ Hogwarts. but since he escaped, maybe Sev could still get into his home, despite or exactly cuz of the the blood wards. oh i also like Remus and Sirius both alive and well. they're quite true to character as well, and fun to read. it's also nice to read some Draco.
    ok babbled enuf, all in all i really like this story. keep it going, i look forward for the rest.
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  • From Rayne11 on February 03, 2007
    Omg!!! How could you leave it at thaaaat! Please update again sooon! We've waited so long for this chapter (thnks btw!). omgomgomgomg I really like you series. Poor Harry.....and Sev D:

    Sorry if this review doesn't make too much sense >.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on October 23, 2006
    Just thought I would let you know I really enjoyed both the finished stories alot and this one looks like it is going to be just as good. Gee if Harry was to try and have sex with grant would the man be balless by any chance. K.
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