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Reviews for Harry and his witches

By : darkwave390
  • From ANON - unknown on November 24, 2006
    Make the brotherhood good and have Chocolate pair up with Harry, and from the save list add Katie, Patils, Daphne, Hannah, and Luna.
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  • From ANON - MADness on November 17, 2006
    I think you should make the Dark Brotherhood, be evil so that Harry and Chocolate can pit their powers of seduction against each other.
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  • From ANON - Cerberus on November 16, 2006
    P.S.: Sorry for the double post, my internet connection dropped for second and I wasn't sure it posted the first time.
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  • From ANON - Cerberus on November 16, 2006
    Have the Dark Brotherhood be a mix of dark and light a Shadow Brotherhood, like the Yin and Yang simbol. And have them join Harry. If so maybe you can make a Harry x Chocolate Lemon scene or even a Threesome whit Tonks :D

    On the save list have: Katie Bell + Daphne Greengrass + Lisa Turpin + The Patil Twins (maybe even Hannah Abbot). The other can be killed for all I care.

    Hope you update soon.
    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Cerberus on November 16, 2006
    Have the Dark Brotherhood be a mix of dark and light a Shadow Brotherhood, like the Yin and Yang simbol. And have them join Harry. If so maybe you can make a Harry x Chocolate Lemon scene or even a Threesome whit Tonks :D

    On the save list have: Katie Bell + Daphne Greengrass + Lisa Turpin + The Patil Twins (maybe even Hannah Abbot). The other can be killed for all I care.

    Hope you update soon.
    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Melissa on November 16, 2006
    i love the story please continue
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  • From ANON - kratos on November 16, 2006
    another good chapter as to which girls Harry should get from the list Katie and Hannah would be my choices and maybe Neville could get a girl too. THanks and bye.
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  • From ANON - Lady Lynn on November 15, 2006
    So, I just read what you have of this story so far and I must say that I like it a lot. Umm so I've really got no one for you to save since you brought Neville into the fold. I vote for the dark brethren or whatever you call them (im tired and will be going to bed shortly, sorry that my memory sucks) to join harry. so yeah. Have a wonderful day.
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  • From ANON - NN on November 15, 2006
    If you bring Luna into the mix it would give Hary and co a in with Ravenclaw.
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  • From ANON - dennis on November 15, 2006
    great story so far, can't wait for it to be updated
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  • From ANON - Ladybug452000 on November 08, 2006
    Your repeated the same chapter twice but beyond that its preety awesome and by that I mean its....OMG ITS SOOOO GREAT I LOVE IT AND CANT WAIT I LOVE YOUUUUUUUU!!! thats all I am trying to say....thanks my email is Ladybug452000@Gmail.com feel free to rant and rave or whatever
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  • From ANON - claire on November 08, 2006
    You duplicated a chapter (9 & 10 are the same). FYI.
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  • From ANON - MADness on November 07, 2006
    If you're going to kill of Hermione, you should at least have Harry fuck her first, and probably involve Ginny in some way. Also, what about the Patil sisters. They would be interesting to play around with. You could even have Harry send them to India for recruits or somthing.

    Anyways, its a good story. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - al on October 28, 2006
    cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - FordPrefect on October 25, 2006
    I love this story
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