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Reviews for Spin the Bottle

By : tlb69
  • From bokskywalker on November 13, 2008
    DROOL...
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  • From ANON - dumbo on November 22, 2006
    That was the most hilariously disturbing thing I have ever read. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Aniona on September 16, 2006
    wow, that was so much fun, loved all of it.
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  • From ANON - Andrew on September 11, 2006
    that was pretty good for the type of story it was. I would have liked to have seen more of the characters involved in sex acts, so perhaps you'll add a chapter going into more detail. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Mary-Sue on September 09, 2006
    that was great and i always thought that fred and george would have a foot fetish a bit creepy to some point but great none the less
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  • From ANON - Miya on September 05, 2006
    I liked it and I really really want more! you could so turn this into something really cool!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2006
    umm..no offense but that was pretty much impossible to read. Forone..even putting aff.net on the smallest font there is...there was still side scrolling which is really hte most annoyng thing when reading a story. There is pretty much no character development...aside from naming hte characters..you really have no way of telling who is speaking or doing anything..you need to give them personalities. I hope you don't get angry..because you should take critisism to heart and learn from your mistakes..it will make you a better writer.
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