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Reviews for The Makeover - COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From daycrump79 on June 27, 2009
    one i would just like to say that most likely you made a deal with the devil
    because its no way in hell you can write a story this fucking good and i am
    so pissed off that it had to end. wow once again great this story made me
    feel evey way that one can feel. the smut in this alone was carzy and i think
    that if you ever stop writing that i would be sad as if i lost my best friend.
    lol thank you for all of your wonderful stories.
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  • From daycrump79 on June 19, 2009
    its so crazy how i never look at the person who writes the story intil the
    very end i should have known that this was one of yours because im saying
    in my mind this story is really good then i look and BAM its you. as always
    well done and ill pm you on ff.net to ask you some things about this site
    because its kinda weird to me. thanks again for another wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - WilliamSpike on February 17, 2009
    "Al Dente". I laughed so hard that I'll forgive your horrendous mutilation of vampire canon.
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  • From smmz79 on August 13, 2008
    As you can tell i am working my way through all of your stories i finished 'hard times...' now i am on 'makeover' i just have to comment on the sybil/severus thing... EEEWWWWW ok i know you have made it a little blip in the story about how sybil has a crush on severus well it is funny that you made severus drunk enough to actually sleep with her tha tis a memory that he is probably happy to not have
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  • From flowerthefabulous on February 29, 2008
    ewwww actual seaman in a real spell i may have worked with some weird stuff before but that is just wrong....i can't imagine using that...

    really good story BTW i love reading you work i'm slowly working through it all.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2008
    OMG This story is the BEST!! HOT HOT HOT!! I just loved it! I am off to read more of your great writings!! Thanks for sharing them :-)
    Lisa
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  • From PHONELADY on November 19, 2007
    AHHH ANOTHER GREAT STORY AND THANKS FOR LETTING HIM LIVE!
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  • From ANON - Selina on August 22, 2007
    Alright...again, fantastic story.. I liked Miles as a person, but lover wise...Severus all the way!
    I am officially addicted to you and your stories...
    I don't have many left now to read... Read all the long ones, now moving to the short ones..
    Take Care and keep writing!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Villy on July 06, 2007
    I love Adam. Reminds me of a guy I used to work with.

    "Oh come ON honey! People would kill for your hair! Don't hide it in a bun all the time!"

    heheheh
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  • From astsweetheart18 on May 04, 2007
    i loved it!!!! i couldnt stop reading it from start to finish. Great job
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  • From Sooz on February 18, 2007
    Had to review midway...this is so great seeing Adam and Victor again. You really have something with those two characters. Almost like Jay and Silent Bob had a baby with The Bird Cage. LOL. Seriously though, you should take them out of fanfiction and give them their own story. You have talent to be original. Thanks for all of the fun reads you have given me...now go give Adam and Victor to an unsuspecting world. ;) Hugs, Susan
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 03, 2006
    *sniff* So sad to see it go. That was one great ending! I loved it so much! But damn I say that about all of your stories, LOL! This was awesome though!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 03, 2006
    Chapter 45~

    Gah! Severus, making a deal with Adam. What he woudn't do for Hermione. That was great. And Adam is so sneaky it is wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 03, 2006
    Chapter 43~

    That was lovely. Yummy Severus. And so thoughtful to go and get her potions in the middle of night.
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