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Reviews for Picking Wildflowers

By : SlashySnitch
  • From ANON - Sally on November 27, 2006
    Okay, first, I only read the first and the last chapters, so I probably can't tell you that much about this story.
    After you gave Harry superpowers in chapter one and made Draco a parselmouth you already hit two of my pet peeves, so I didn't want to keep on reading, but the sub! Harry thing intrigued me, so I thought perhaps it's just a problem of the first chapters and skipped a few. Perhaps I wouldn't be that confused if I hadn't done that, but... I don't understand how the Harry from chapter 1 became the pathetic creature in the last chapter. My guess is you became bored of super powered Harry and did something drastic to him to make him more interesting... but the only thing you did is making your own character out of character.
    This story would be much more interesting if it were more thought through... Well, no. Just ignore me. As I said you hit my pet peeves, so I shouldn't be reading this story anyway. There are obviously a lot of people who like this and your writing style is okay. I just wanted to tell you what I think.
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  • From ANON - lazycrazykitten on November 26, 2006
    Then yes, I want a sequel. I was only hesitant before because some people have a sequel take place like 20 years in the future. That's so cute! At least they want a family!
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  • From ANON - Bron on November 26, 2006
    Yay they're getting married! My email is valid I use it daily. I not sure abouts names for the baby but how about jamie for a first or second name. When I first read that harrys magic was being drained my first thought was voldermort was draining him somehow but then quickly decided that he was pregnant. I reckon the baby should be able to protect itself and harry with magic kinda like wyatt did on Charmed, if you haven't seen it the baby heals you and makes a sheild around you. I can't wait for the sequal it looks like fun times are ahead.
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  • From ANON - katie on November 26, 2006
    awesome sex scene! yay for ginny not having harrys kid! seriously though i loved this chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jaklyn Toki on November 26, 2006
    Number 1) THAT SEX SCENE WAS AMAZING! YOU ARE A GOD! *bows* One of the best I've ever read.

    Number 2) I always knew Ginny was a slut. And I love that she's stuck with Colin. But I feel so sorry for him. She's going to cheat on him so much...he needs a nice mistress to keep him happy.

    Numer 3) The thought of Harry getting knocked up...YES! I could see him with a baby girl and Draco being an over protective father, couldn't you? Like yelling at any boy that comes in contact with her.

    As for names, I've always been partial to Lillie Rae, Merulina Tarquinia, and Tsukiko Raiden. For boys...Sasha Rene. My poor children, should I have any. *giggles*

    Update soon, please! Sequel, new chapter, WHATEVER! Jaklyn just wants more of this fic. PLEASE.


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  • From ANON - Z on November 25, 2006
    for the first chapter, i do not like harry as a character. he seems too showy of his powers, like he's superior and arrogant and we all know that harry isnt about that. i dunno, thats just a turn off for this story
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  • From ANON - holly on November 25, 2006
    The father of the baby
    no one is in danger of being stabed with a spork anymore except ginny na having to marry collin is much better (worse?)
    never even thought about collin ha ha ginny deserved that

    Should there be a sequel?
    yes definatly

    Should Harry and Draco have a child: Boy or girl?
    yes a boy



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  • From ANON - Miz Valeer on November 25, 2006
    XP lol no no no... I didn't actually want Harry to be th father.... it's been god knows how long since I've wished for a HetPreg. lol psh.... and yes- I AM quite a bit off as I am frequently reminded. XD lol

    AS for Scimegour (sp?)..well.. that me trying to actually guess the random father you were sure to pick, due to Tonic-err...-Gin's slutty ways.... I knew it wouldn't be Dean, after all. lol.... elementary dear..erm.. Authoress, elementary. :D oh, and btw- Colin = the PERFECT rabdom daddy. ^ ^

    ..as far as sequels go.. I'm all for one. ... XP the sex(y) scene was great. ;D it actually DOES seem like they love each other...

    oh... and.. though the idea of DHxHP kids isn't usually my thing- I say go ahead! ('cuz you're awesome. XP) er.... oh yes.. and I'd have to say, if there was a child... it should be inexplicably half Goblin.... sigh... that wa s aterrible joke- I'd actually choose a girl. ^ ^ Any French name is a nam I'd like. >.> this has nothing to do with my French heritage...
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  • From SerenityMalfoy on November 25, 2006
    I absolutly luv this story so far ^_^ you are doing a great job!
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  • From ANON - amyordinary on November 25, 2006
    Great chapter! I liked who you picked to be the father of the baby.. Ginny deserves it! Thank you so much for making it mpreg.. please let them have a boy! I'd definitely read a sequel... even if you suddenly decided to make it even longer than the original five chapters ;-D
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  • From ANON - cho_cho_san on November 25, 2006
    Thankyouthankyouthankyou for updating so much!

    I definetly loved how you made COLIN the father--HILARIOUS!

    Draco and Harry should have a baby in the -sequel-, unless you decide to do a '__ year(s) later' chapter. The child should definetly be a girl.

    Update soon!

    Love and support,
    cho_cho_san
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  • From AngelikRebel on November 25, 2006
    I love this story!! I think ther should be a sequel! I think it's funny that Colin is the father. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2006
    wow! that was so awesome! i love this fic so much. i hope it is an MPREG i love mummy harry! oh and an idea for a name...its not common but i like Clove possibly for a boy ...or girl i spose
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  • From ANON - Sammy on November 24, 2006
    -The father of the baby
    I'm shocked...I didn't even think about him being a part of the situation. I was staring at that name for a good five minutes before I started laughing LOL! She had to be desperate to lay down with the Double C. I just don't know what to say about that. I hope she lives an interesting life...Slut!Ginny is a major no no. She seems like the controlling type. I believe Colin's freedom is no more.

    -Should there be a sequel?
    Yes please. I'd love a follow up to this story since it will be ending soon. Would it start up directly where this story leaves off or will it be a few years from now? Perhaps they will have more than one child by then and we can get an interesting chapter written in the POV of one of the children (or their only child) about his/her life with Draco and Harry.

    -The sex scene
    Very nice! I kept wondering if someone was going to pop up and disrupt the flow again. So glad that they finally got some with each other. It was hot. My blood pressure has now resumed its regularly scheduled level.

    -Should Harry and Draco have a child: Boy or girl?
    Bring on the kiddies. I don't care if it is a boy or a girl. I like the thought of one or the other equally. I think it's easier to come up with boys names than girls and with a baby being born into the Potter Malfoy family, the child will need a good strong name that will fit also one that isn't used constantly.

    -Names for the child?
    Boys: Alexander, Laine, Christopher, Eric, Logan...
    Girls: Arianna, Nicolette, Aya, Halee, Alexis...
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  • From ANON - Aka on November 24, 2006
    It's good that this will be slash. Otherwise, this would be a flame :P (I soooooo hate Ginny. Stupid little b*tch.....)
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