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Reviews for More Than Meets the Eye

By : ryzmah
  • From ANON - Avanell on September 24, 2006
    I don't like Ron/Lav together by any means, but as to your note at the end, perhaps Hermione has a little crush burried deep inside her?
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  • From ANON - yume on September 22, 2006
    please continue writing your fanfic i love reading a fanfic about the marriage law between draco n hermione
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  • From ANON - ocard on September 21, 2006
    i love ur story. i need more, more MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2006
    *snickers* eheh. clever. i like it. and how very slytherin of dumbledore... ahh but it was good. cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2006
    I like how they accidentally back themselves into the corner. I dislike Dumbledore's explanation of why they would make each other happy--if Hermione and Draco fall out of their house stereotypes, why can't others? Why couldn't Hermione be happy with an atypical Ravenclaw? Also, Hermione is slightly prone to panicking--would she actually take the news of the law so calmly? And would Dumbledore really okay telling her friends? Ron is not precisely discrete.

    Would the law or wizarding custom prevent an open marriage?

    Have you considered a staged "drunken elopement"? It'd be really funny to see that get mad at having to be so undiginified. Or have them set up a rumor that Hermione was imperio-ed or blackmailed into proposing? I'm curious to see how you get them married without society being utterly bewildered. Please, no detailed descriptions of bridesmaid dresses!

    I like how you're actually addressing the details and not making the law so ridiculously extreme. Hence all the questions, since your setup is more realistic than most.
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  • From ANON - darian on September 18, 2006
    please keep going I really like it
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 17, 2006
    Bravo! I am definitely keeping my eyes on this story. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on September 17, 2006
    I love this! Original, witty, downright hysterical! Can't wait for more! LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on September 17, 2006
    A very good start. I look forward to the next chapters. Will we find out who the other spy is?
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  • From ANON - kindley on September 16, 2006
    I like it! Bloody good so far. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on September 16, 2006
    Wow!!
    This story of yours has some serious potential! I love everything about it so far and can't wait for you to update it =)
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  • From ANON - Jen on September 16, 2006
    Oh my lord!!! That last paragraph made me laugh so hard i needed to find the bathroom. Bloody hilarious.

    Especially since it's their own fault they're gonna have to get married. Draco because of his cocky arrogance and Hermione because she has to appear like the peerfect Gryffindor and hates to loose.

    Initially I thought great another bloody marriage fic. BUT no... this is definitely different. Love what you're doing keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Lexy on September 16, 2006
    That was great. I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - Anathema on September 16, 2006
    Great bloody buggering hell!!!! You HAVE To update! It's just CRUEL to leave us hanging like that!!!!!! LOL
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  • From ANON - mitz on September 16, 2006
    update soon. i like it - it's not ooc like other marriage law fics
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