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Reviews for More Than Meets the Eye

By : ryzmah
  • From ANON - Verie on October 22, 2007
    This Marriage Law Fic is just fantastic. I love how they interact as married couples.
    Please update soon.
    I just hope that your internet is up again, then you could finish it.
    I just want to know how this wonderful story ends.
    As promised you said you'll finish it.
    I, along with your loyal readers will count on it.
    *Squee

    Waiting.. patiently
    Verie
    and oh yeah for updates you could also sent them to: verihappy@yahoo.com
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  • From sherrithewriter on September 26, 2007
    Great story. I love the plot and the way their relationship has evolved. I look forward to reading more. E-mail me when you update -- thanks!
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on September 01, 2007
    Ryz, thanks sooo much for updating. Hopefully, you'll be able to use one of those lovely Internet cafes over in London. I have also found the internet helpful in house hunting. I was missing your story: it's quite a treat and a very good take on the Marriage Law. Hope all's well at your end, and I would love an email when you update: kazfeist@gmail.com. Just put dramione fic in the subject line. :D
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  • From ANON - the_devilish_twin on August 29, 2007
    Wow O_O This is such a good story!! I just happened to be browsing and couldn't stop reading it! :) Anyways I LOVE your story and am eager to see the next installment! I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what's next :P

    It's a good story and flows well. Also, I'm not sure if you'd like any advanced critque, and i suck at giving any sorts of advice, lol. :) I'm not sure if I'm supposed to review each and every chap, or if it's ok if i just put one for the whole thing. (Sorry if I got it wrong, first time leaving a review) ^_^
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  • From WriterChick1990 on August 25, 2007
    love this cant wait to read more
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  • From LiaTrent on August 24, 2007
    This is really good, I like it a lot because most of their reactions are believable.
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  • From ANON - Eva on August 20, 2007
    Wow. I'm totally in love with this! I hope you continue and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2007
    This is such a lovely story. I hope you do update again soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 19, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From mikaria on August 18, 2007
    Just finished your story and enjoyed it quite a bit! Both characters didn't stay 'in character' thru the whole thing but I found that I really didn't care all that much! I like the way you've written both characters and the storyline is just getting interesting! And of course, did enjoy the smut quite a bit! Never enough smut in most stories but yours is just right! :D Thanks and keep writing!
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  • From Cheile on August 17, 2007
    wow, this is a very neat take on the Marriage Law idea! i hope to see you update again soon; this is getting very interesting!
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  • From ANON - Jane on August 16, 2007
    You should continue it. Its sort of a down moment. Its saddening. Its very depressing to see couples like that, especially 'that' couple.
    Well, that is part of a marriage. They should kiss and make up soon!

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  • From ANON - lyria on August 15, 2007
    please update as soon as you can,, you really left the story at a crappy moment i'm dying to know what will happen.
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 15, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Amy on August 15, 2007
    I am really enjoying your story; can
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