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Reviews for The Lord of The Fae

By : Draggenxx
  • From Draggenxx on September 29, 2006
    JUST WANTED TO SAY THANKS EVERYBODY! And for your info Snarky I have graduated highschool, and I happen to be dyslexic. I think all things considering i've been getting alot better and yeah i'm in the process of getting a betta. So thank you for your kind concern! When it's betta'ed maybe then you can melt that ice heart of yours enough to read it.
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  • From ANON - Snarky B. on September 29, 2006
    Oh, by the way, are you even old enough to log onto this web site? From the level of your writing, it's obvious you haven't graduated from high school yet.
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  • From ANON - Snarky B. on September 29, 2006
    I counted a several errors in the first five paragraphs alone. Get a beta reader, or at least read over what you write. When you clean your story up, (why did you write one if you didn't want to put any effort into it?) then maybe I'll read it.
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  • From ANON - natwest on September 29, 2006
    I want to say it's time harry get off his high horse and SMELL THE SHIT THAT IS LIFE. I see the angry that harry has for life, but that what war is and he needs to see the big picture. Dumbdore knew harry COULD NOT HANDLE THE TRUTH. Black also has to grow a back bone, he love snape withe passon I love and you doing a great job. Ron great but I see more going on with charactor then you saying. Love this story please email me when you post again. Will be wait for update.
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  • From ANON - Nia on September 28, 2006
    UPDATE RIGHT NOW! you jus have to, A__A !!!
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  • From ANON - Blackvirgin17 on September 27, 2006
    NOOOOOOO you can't just leave us hanging like that!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - dm999 on September 27, 2006
    I like it very much.

    Please update soon
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  • From ANON - madnesswithin me on September 26, 2006
    literally, CAN NOT WAIT!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on September 24, 2006
    Ooh, I loved that! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - vinchildy on September 23, 2006
    i love your story,but you need a beta for your spelling.but other than that it a good story keep going.
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  • From ANON - McFace on September 22, 2006
    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE LOVE IT. CANT WAIT FOR MORE.
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  • From ANON - Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn on September 22, 2006
    AWESOME FIC!!!!!!!!!!!

    And what happens now???!!!!!

    HHhhhmmmmm?????

    Desperate minds want to know!!!

    XD
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  • From ANON - Amessis on September 22, 2006
    I loved that once again!
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  • From ANON - Blackvirgin17 on September 20, 2006
    oh wow... great story I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bianca D. on September 19, 2006
    Your plot isn't bad, it is an interesting idea. However, the flow of your story is very choppy. The story line is hard to follow, there doesn't seem to be enough connections and transitions from one idea to the next. Perhaps you should get a beta and work with him or her to write the parts you have writen so they flow much better than they do now. Other than that, the plot is pretty good. Oh yeah, before I forget, perhaps you should try to spell check your work. Sometimes a misspelled word retracted from you story because I was trying to figure out what you meant.
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