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Reviews for The Lord of The Fae

By : Draggenxx
  • From ANON - Alison on December 17, 2006
    I went to a Christian college and they didn't restrict any sites... Maybe it won't be as bad as you say it'll be...

    But please don't drop any stories. I REALLY don't like with authors do that. I don't really care if it takes longer, just so that the stories get finished.

    Just my humble opinion. =o)
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  • From ANON - pleiadeswolfe on December 17, 2006
    That's okay and good luck and congradulations.


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  • From ANON - chicklet on December 17, 2006
    I read other fics that only update once a month, so long lag time won't put me off. You should probably add a short extra warning at the beginning of the fic and recent chapters, so those who dislike waits can just avoid your stories till they're completed. Good luck at your new school.
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  • From ANON - Dini on December 16, 2006
    quick, quick.....I
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  • From ANON - kim on December 14, 2006
    Great story. I think Hiaro should top first then Ron and then you should ask agian to see what one the people like the best. Updated Soon Please.
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  • From ANON - Jamee43 on December 14, 2006
    I think that Ron should top. Or they could switch :p It's true that Hiaro has done it before, but he could tell Ron what to do, guide him if you will. Oh yeah, and is Hari and Simone going to be a couple? and why haven't you mentioned Hermione in a while? She kind of just disappeared :-.. Well, anyway... i loved this story and i hope you update really soon!
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  • From ANON - jjinks on December 12, 2006
    I think you should have Hiaro (is that how you spell it) top at the beginning until Ron gets more comfortable with it. I can see both of them topping but Ron more often.
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  • From ANON - James on December 12, 2006
    Ohh. forgot to add that I love your story, its got a good plot and you are doing well, bad spelling and all. I will take bad spelling over bad plot anytime. You make the story sound very plausible. Ciao
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  • From ANON - James on December 12, 2006
    It would be nice if Hiaro topped because as King, Ron is already in control, but in the bed room he can relax and enjoy the ride ;)
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  • From ANON - blackladycharon on December 11, 2006
    Hmmm, I like this so far, and I'm dying to see what you'll come up with. As for who should be on top, I'd suggest having Hiaro be dominant until Ron gains more confidence, then having them trade off, but that's just me.
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  • From ANON - wizli on December 10, 2006
    I think Ron definitely has to top, he's a natural top. Even you said it describing him as this masculine, oh-so-hot man (wet, disheveled Ron with a sword... mmmm, yumi) while Hiaro has been described as more feminine and submissive to Ron. I'm sure Hiaro is just dying for Ron to take him, he's craving it, but maybe he wants to top from the bottom?. That way he'll be doing all the work and Ron can lie there, enjoy and stare to his beautiful Hiaro. Oh, the hot mental images! *faints*. By the way, what's happening with Hermione...?. Maybe in your sequel Ron and Hiaro could switch roles, surely then Ron will be more confident in his sexuality and their intimacy. Harry and Draco are such a lovely couple... *sighs*
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2006
    Well..I've seen situations like this, and Hiaro could be top until Ron gets the hang of it, kind of a teaching thing between lovers.
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  • From ANON - miki on December 10, 2006
    chapter's good but you spelt dilemma wrong! you wrong delima
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  • From ANON - Becky on December 10, 2006
    Fire your beta reader and get one who knows English. She's doing a crappy job.
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  • From ANON - Snarky B. on December 10, 2006
    Please take the time to have your story beta read--don't be lazy. (unless it is removed, as I'm going to report you to the site administrator) And by the way, I know you are under 18 and not old enough to access this site. How do I know? Because you don't the difference between 'there,' 'their' and 'they're,' 'two,' 'to' and 'too.' Most children by the age of ten have learned this. So you're either a primary school dropout, or an American teen. (American high schools are known their poor teaching and lazy students) I suspect the latter. If you are going to continue to plague the Internet with your writing, I suggest you ask one of your teachers from your school to help you. Also, I encourage you to tell your parents that you write graphic slash. I don't think they'd approve.
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