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Reviews for The Lord of The Fae

By : Draggenxx
  • From ANON - lili on November 04, 2006
    I am really enjoying this story. I like the characterization of both Draco and Harry. I absolutely love the fact that Ron is so straight that he can't figure anything out. I can't wait to read more. However, there is a lot of grammer and spelling errors in this story. Sometimes you use the wrong word in a sentance and it disrupts the flow of the story. I have to stop and figure out the correct word and then go on. Have you thought of using a beta?

    Keep writing there's a lot of potential in this story.

    lili
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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 03, 2006
    A few pointers: You are confusing their, there, and they're; their is the plural possessive form, there is a location, and they're is the contraction of they are. You are also confusing loose and lose, where and we're and were, as well as then and than. Please, check out www.askoxford.com or www.dictionary.com for clarification. This would make a good story even better.
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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 03, 2006
    Shorten the dividing line in Chapter Four; it makes the chapter too wide for the screen and going back and forth is giving me a headache!
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  • From ANON - jjinks on November 02, 2006
    Not again and with Seamus watching this time too.

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  • From ANON - D/H on November 01, 2006
    Ok, here's the thing...Do you know the difference from the following words: 'We're, Were, their, etc??' Becuz, after reading this story, it looks as if you don't and judging by the other mistakes, your REALLY need to work on your lack of english skills, plus, your beta isn't doing his/her job, becuz, judging by ALL the mistakes she missed in every single chapter/paragraph, she needs major help with her grammar..

    Well, down to the more positive note of this review..The stories great..I absolutely love it..I hope to read more soon..
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 01, 2006
    Yay!! New chapter! I love the ending(Snape deserved that taunting ^.^) and I'm anxious to see what Hari does with the connection she gained briefly with George. I hope she helps Fred! I feel so bad for him! And poor Dean..your brilliant work is making me cry! Lol

    Keep going!! Update soon please!!
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  • From ANON - Jan on November 01, 2006
    OMGOMGOMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
    I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH.
    PLEASE, PLEASE, OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^
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  • From ANON - Liliyes on October 31, 2006
    A little correction to your German sentence
    ^^

    Sie k
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  • From ANON - Missa on October 31, 2006
    I just wanted to say...I have no idea why chapter 4 is like that.
    It SHOULD look like all the other chapters I beta'd. It's really buggin me now!
    Sigh...there really isn't anything wrong with it, it's just set kinda wide, sorry bout that.
    It must be from when I e-mailed it back to Ayue. Don't really know.
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  • From ANON - on October 29, 2006
    fallow=follow
    watch your 'then' and 'than' placement
    muggel=muggle
    other than that I follow your story rabidly!
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  • From ANON - QueenNilya on October 29, 2006
    Dear God. What an incredible and powerful story. I am amazed at how well you write about the darkness that exists in every single person. This story has made me think about what book 7 may be about. How will Harry kill Voldemort, without destroying himself or anyone else he loves? I love how you have done this and I can't wait to read more. please update soon, I will be looking for it daily......
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  • From ANON - Kate on October 29, 2006
    Why is chapter 4 so messed up? I had to print it off to read it...I think it needs to be re-formatted. oh well, on to other chapters!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on October 29, 2006
    I haven't cried when reading anything since the first time I read Half Blood Prince! *claps* Brilliant idea! Wonderful couples! You captured every single character J.K created perfectly and gave them new life! Ah! Sirius/Snape was something I'd never seen eye to eye about, but it was amazing how you set that up!

    I kinda feel bad for Hermione, but honestly you're right with how you made Draco reason! Ron and Hermione aren't meant to be, not in this story! My favorite couples are Harry/Draco(of course) and Seamus/Dean! I was sobbing through the 21st chapter when Dean was finally back with Seamus! Ah! You better make Seamus live or so help you..bad..THINGS will happen!

    ^.^ You're a great author! Keep it up and update soon please!
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  • From Pheobi on October 27, 2006
    Okay...so, I just finished reading Chapter Fifteen, where you posted the note about what that little bitch in your dorms said. UGH! I happen to be adoring your story, first off. Second off, I feel the need to just sort of publicly refute her bullshit!

    I was trained to be a missionary. For two years, I spent four hours a week in an intensive study of the bible, being trained to know it inside and out, so I could be a missionary. When, for family reasons, I could no longer attend those classes, I went to a church closer to my home than the place I had been studying and spent two to three hours a week there, also studying the bible. Over a year later, when I had some difficulties with one of my teachers at that church, I attended classes at another church with a friend for a year. So, I have spent a total of over four years in intensive study of the bible. NO WHERE in it does it state that god hates homosexuals. Actually, the bible contains 36 admonishments to homosexuals, but over THREE HUNDRED admonishments to heterosexuals. Tell me, which group does it sound like god feels needs more guidance?

    Also, just because she's obviously a prude, frigid little bitch doesn't mean that those of us with normal sex-drives are sickos. Thanks, but no. Sex is necessary and it's been proven that human beings are innately sexual creatures. We are taught to "control" our instincts with logic and morals, but our bodies are still driven, in many ways, by the natural urge to have sex. So sorry to Little Miss Priss, but just because she isn't getting any doesn't give her the right to have a stick up her arse about sex in general.

    I also happen to be a writer. Not just of fanfiction (And if you ever check out some of the major HP webpages you will see that JKR condones fanfiction and in fact finds it flattering.), but also of books. Unpublished, so far, but hopefully not for much longer! I also have a dear friend who recently published a book...she has been writing fanfiction for years and it was, in fact, a huge deal among her devoted readers who couldn't wait to buy her book! So fanfiction isn't worthless or unread or pathetic...it's a way to expand your writing skills and amuse both yourself and your readers at the same time!

    And while I could continue to shred everything else this bitch said, I've decided it's not worth my time and effort to do so. I happen to, as I said before, adore your story. I haven't been able to stop reading since I found it! I'm going to go read more as soon as I post this review, actually. Thank you so much for giving me something so wonderful to read!

    ~ FallenAngel
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  • From ANON - Jan on October 25, 2006
    OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG! I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOUR NEXT CHAP. PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
    WITH EVERY CHAPTER YOUR STORY GET BETTER AND BETTER.
    KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB.^_^
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