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Reviews for Lucius and the Waif - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Bloody Rapture on December 03, 2007
    So here's my back story: I haven't been on adultfanfiction.net in a long time, and I came back due to some kind of recommendation a friend gave me. Needless to say, it kind of blowed. I went to a few other fics, hoping to find the GOOD stuff, and didn't find jack shit. And then, I stumbled upon this little jewel.

    It was fantastic. Your writing is the writing that makes this site worth looking at, and not some plotless shit that most people tend to write about. Well, that's not exactly a bad thing, I guess. I mostly just have a problem with badly written pieces, and yours was just plain bloody wonderful. Nice flow, wonderful vocabulary, and believable characters made this fic zoom to the top of my Best Fanfics Ever. Your writing style captured both of Lea and Lucius' viewpoints perfectly without getting too wrapped up in their heads or just skimming the surface.

    I hope you continue to produce such brilliant pieces, even if it is fan fiction. Sadly, I'm not going to be able to read your Lucius/Hermione fic at this moment--I have to return to real life. Feel free to email me; it's legit. Good luck!
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  • From Kmiles on November 28, 2007
    Beautifully written. I enjoy how lucius reatins his cold heartedness even when faced with love.
    Lea's story is so tragic! I really pity her.
    The link to her and Slitheryn is origional and interesting.
    the only qualm I have is Narcissa's involvement?
    are they togther or divorced?

    sorry if thats an irrelevent question!!

    I enjoy your writing very much m'dear, keep suprising me =p

    JI as LM = sex!!
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  • From sarahyellow on November 20, 2007
    I don't know how old this story is, but I've just been reading ir and I really like it.
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  • From Damiana on October 11, 2007
    This was a fun read. This is the second story I read of yours and it is nice to observe an evolution in terms of writing style. This is far smoother than LM's Second Wife. I look forward to reading your other serials.
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  • From DanniGurl on September 07, 2007
    I LOVE your writing style as well as the story itself. Too few writers are willing to touch upon Lucius Malfoy's sexual nature-at least his straight one. Lol. Many seem to find homosexual couplings galore. But, honestly, I'm hooked. Also, thank you for your review on "The Dragon"-I definitely went back and changed the "less" to "lest"-I'm a grammatical freak, and I'm ever so grateful. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - mirina63 on August 08, 2007
    Great story! Keep doin'more! ;))

    Mirina
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  • From ANON - sheherazade on April 30, 2007
    I know it's a bit weird to review the same story twice, but I can't stop thinking about this one; it has been on my mind for a couple of days now. I think the premise is perfect - the abused girl who is 'saved' by Lucius' tender (and not so tender) attentions. It's brilliantly conceived and executed; I am just in awe. Anyway, I'll stop now before I exhaust all the superlatives. I'm sure more will be called for soon... But at the moment, I have to say this is my favourite fic of yours, my favourite Lucius-centric fic, and in the running for my all-time favourite. It's classic.
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  • From on April 29, 2007
    Hi LaBib,

    I feel really bad, I should have reviewed this story ages ago, but I didn't. You see I actually read this when you were writing it and I thought it was wonderful. I used to wait anxiously for each chapter, checking every night to see if you updated. Of course, back then I never reviewed anything. I was too shy and figured no one really wanted to hear my opinion. Not to mention, it seems like every time I write a review, I see a grammatical error in it the next day, which drives me crazy. Of course now that I am writing myself, I know how much it means to get a review. So anyway, while I know it is almost too late, I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story.

    I loved how you had Lucius set up like a King in Azkaban. That is so classic! It reminded me of this old 70s movie I once saw late at night called
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  • From sheherazade on April 26, 2007
    Oh my God, this is freakishly fantastic. I salute your fervid and inventive imagination and your crystalline prose. I just wish I hadn't read it all in one sitting but had eked out the pleasure a little more...now I feel as if I've eaten a big box of Belgian chocolates all in one go...though obviously minus the nausea and weight gain... That scene with the hooks and the quirt (quirt? How quaint! More q words needed in fiction generally, I feel) was so utterly up my street it was eerie. I might be revisiting that one when the need arises.
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  • From Alabaster on April 24, 2007
    I thoroughly enjoyed this story! And there's only one snake that i'd like to find as well.. lol
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  • From Hollypopuk on January 29, 2007
    Wow!! I just read the story right the way through and I loved it. SO original and I love how you portrayed Lea, she fitted into the Potterverse wonderfully. Beautifully written. Can't wait to read more from you :) *gives you muffins*

    Theia
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Odyssia on October 12, 2006
    This is an absolutely beautiful story, and was, wonderfully and surprisingly, not what I expected at all. How pleasant to see Lucius go through so many changes and yet still remain in character. I also liked Lea very much; she is a very good match for him. So glad to see that she will also be happy.

    Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Mads on October 09, 2006
    Enjoyed it very much! Thank You for the wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on October 08, 2006
    Wonderful ending! I'm sad cuz it's over by now, but I'm also very glad you found a good end without force. Your characters remained themselves, the plot was amazing, and I'm definitely looking forward to your next story. Really well done, hon! I loved every single chapter of it!! :)
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  • From ANON - Brooke on October 02, 2006
    Another wonderful Chapter! This is a great story!
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