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Reviews for Lucius and the Waif - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From InfernalParadise on September 30, 2006
    I'm so stunned that you managed to keep the real Lucius Malfoy character throughtout all these chapters. It's just wonderful beyond words. Which the story is, too, by the way. :) Absolutely adorable.
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  • From ANON - zairaphel on September 25, 2006
    This story is amazing! I like how you've managed to keep Lucius in character through out the whole thing. I have to say, it's brilliant. It's definately like nothing I've read in the way of Lucius fics. I absolutely cannot wait for the next update. Keep up the inspiring work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2006
    I don't normally read fanfiction with an original character, but this one caught my eye. I'm glad it did, because it's very well written and I'm hooked now, wanting to know how things will work out for Lucius and Lea. I love the amount of detail you've included with things like the furnishings, clothing and tableware; it builds a rich picture of Lucius' life and current surroundings without being intrusive to the story. I also like your descriptions of his 'flexible conscience' and Slytherin psyche. More chapters, please!
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  • From ANON - purrfus on September 23, 2006
    Just finished Chapter 17. You are doing Lucius so well. So many try to make him the tragically misunderstood white night or a psycho. He's just not that 2D and you have him.

    Thanks for writing and sharing.
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  • From ANON - purrfus on September 23, 2006
    Chapter 13 - I need to be working on way to many projects, but I can't stop reading.
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  • From ANON - Mads on September 21, 2006
    WONDERFUL! I'm hooked!
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  • From ANON - Athena Nike on September 21, 2006
    Wow. I LOVE this story. Lucius is totally in character and I can't wait to see how things progress. Please keep updating!
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 21, 2006
    I've read it so far and I'm amazed with every new chapter. You have such wonderful ideas, plus a lovely style. And - this is what I consider best - you keep Lucius as the character he is. It's just brilliant! :)
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  • From ANON - Elicia on September 21, 2006
    I really like this story. It's an excellent read, I love your style. The smut are perfect, hot but tastefully described. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Mads on September 18, 2006
    Fantastic! I Love it! more please soon?
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 18, 2006
    Simply beautiful and touching. You express so much with simple words that I'm truly amazed. The lack of conversation is just perfect in this state of the story. Please continue! :)
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  • From ANON - Nemesis on September 16, 2006
    This fic is off to a good start. I really enjoyed your other fic, and have no doubt I'll like this one, as well. Once you get the story moving (get some action and further into the plot), you'll probably get a lot more reviews. For now, I'll just ask you to keep updating, as I'm truly interested in how you will progress.
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