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By : elibdally
  • From starrynite45 on January 23, 2008
    hey i actually love Veela fanfic now & this 1 is really great!!! keep going on i wish to read more chapter :)
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  • From Tootsie on January 08, 2008
    Your Plot is cool. up date plzzz.
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  • From ryzmah on December 26, 2007
    I just wanted to let you know that I think that you are doing a great job on this story. Your style and tempo are developing quite well. So many people rush through their story and bravo for not doing that. I know that you said that this story was coming to the end, but I would recommend that you don't rush the ending. If you have the desire you could turn this into a 30 plus chapter story. You have a lot of areas that you could explore.

    Also I wanted to encourage you to write for the love of writing. I know that it can be disheartening when you don't get as many reviews as time goes on, but that doesn't mean people aren't enjoying it.

    Anyway, once again good job and I hope you update soon.

    Ryz
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From EmandSky on December 13, 2007
    please update soon! i love this!
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  • From Crittenz on December 09, 2007
    I love this story. Please keep writing it. It's actually a good Draco/Hermione veela mate story. (I've read some rather crappy ones)
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  • From mariecke22 on December 05, 2007
    i love this story, big fan of veela stories. Since i am not wan to rewiew often i red your plee at your last chapter. So from now on after reading a chapter i will review. But you have to hurry up and update haha!

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  • From SecretQuill on November 30, 2007
    seriously- what has happened to hermione?? she's so meek, the hell? they kidnapped her and she happily agrees to sing a duet together with draco? i can understand that she might not want him dead, but why in the world is she acting so friendly with his parents??
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  • From MB3 on November 29, 2007
    I remember reading this fic when you first started writing it and have to admit that I'm slightly dissappointed in this chapter. Don't get me wrong, I was ecstatic that you updated, but this chapter just does not seem to be on par with the others. All of your chapters have a couple spelling or grammer errors, but this is fanfiction and there are no paid editors to fine-tooth each chapter, so it's to be expected (I can't tell you how many errors I find in my writing). But this chapter seemed to have at least twice the amount of errors than the last one. I really do like this story and appreciate how it's not quite like the other veela fics I have read in the past. I will continue to look for updates, because I really do love this story, but just wanted to express my opinion that this chapter does not seem to accurately reflect the level of writing that you have proven yourself capable of.
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  • From humingbird1989 on November 28, 2007
    Update...update...you know you want to. This story is by far the best veela Draco story that I have read. I think that the approach you took for Draco becoming a veela was original. Please update soon...I want to know what happens
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  • From wicraven on November 28, 2007
    Great post. Love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From emmalouise on November 28, 2007
    not too shabby, i read the whole thing in one hit and i liked it
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  • From mhaj78 on November 27, 2007
    omg you MUST update NOW NOW NOW...this story ROCKS!! i love the concept...i love the reluctant hermione...but even more, i love the soon to be willing hermione! i adore "this side" of the malfoys...on with the smut scene!!
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  • From jraskin on November 27, 2007
    this is AWESOME! Update soon please!!
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  • From lupinsgal on November 27, 2007
    This is a great story. I cant wait to see what happens next, so please please update ASAP!
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