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Reviews for For His Pleasure

By : elibdally
  • From ANON - Anijade on October 18, 2006
    I think you are losing readers and reviews is that this story is becoming less and less believable. Other than Hermione choosing Draco out of guilt nothing of this is in character. You need a Beta to help with your verb issues. I am sorry but Obilivate is not a cure all and not enough to wipe the entire memory of their child from their mind. There would be ramifications of their actions that Magical Creature law won't cover. You have wiped away human rights to get this couple together and that just doesn't work
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  • From ANON - Kanami-Sama on October 18, 2006
    rocks, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lanthir on October 18, 2006
    first: A big hello from Germany!

    second: i love your story!!!!

    third: Please write more, i love veela storys (HERMIONE/DRACO)!

    You see there are three very good reasons to write more and continue
    your story!

    - to know each other
    - the marriage
    - back at school
    - after school
    So pleeeease continue!!!

    ciao Lanthir

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  • From HufflepuffsDarkAngel on October 18, 2006
    I enjoy the Draco(Veela)/Hermione fics, and I have to say that I can't wait to see what will happen with the young couple next.
    @>-',- @>-,'- roses to the author
    --Angel
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  • From ANON - ... on October 17, 2006
    Yes, you are losing reviewers and such. This is NOT how HERMIONE is! What did you do! It's suppose to be challenging! How can Hermione give in THAT easily? Using the excuse that Draco is going to die, is NOT good enough. You made Hermione into a well, Gryffinor sissy, P.S. Hermione is a GRYFFINDOR, make her ACT like ONE!
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  • From ANON - RosePetals on October 17, 2006
    I meant to review earlier, but I recently found this fic and I have to say that it is one of the most unique Veela fics I've ever read, which means a lot with all the ones that pop up. Usually, they annoy me, but I really enjoyed yours. I cannot wait to see the next chapter, and some hot Veela 'marking' ;) I do have one suggestion, though: I noticed throughout the story that some of the words have been misspelled, but that's nothing you can't fix with a beta, which I'm sure plenty of avid readers like myself would be all too happy to provide. Other than that, though, again, I can't wait. Love it, definitely going to check out the rest of your stuff.
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on October 17, 2006
    Great story! I'd love to read more because you've caught my interest with this one. ^_^ Please continue.
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  • From ANON - DuckSong on October 17, 2006
    Just dropping a line to let you know that I am enjoying this fic very much. And it was very nice of Draco to offer to make sure that Hermione stays out of jail.
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  • From ANON - Jessie on October 16, 2006
    I personally love Draco/Hermione Veela fics, especially this one. I just wish it was going to be more than one more chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - mnfm on October 16, 2006
    I'll be waiting for the last chapter; but I have to tell you something. I wish this story would be longer. I think is a great story; I'm sorry people stop reviewing it.

    You do good work, keep it up!


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  • From ANON - 2bfoundwanting on October 16, 2006
    I really like this story, its pretty original for a Veela fic, which is hard to say, because there are TONS out there. Anyways, its good, good concept good character. I cant wait till the next chapter, i hope you finish it soon!
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  • From ANON - Vicky on October 16, 2006
    Awesome story...I check everyday to see if there's more to come. I adore Veela!Draco fics, and this is one of the best I've seen. Please, sir, I want some more! =)
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  • From ANON - Amy on October 16, 2006
    This is a really good story and im enjoying it immensly...anticipating updates daily....lol....I would luv to see a version of this story with a slightly more darker veela version of draco...ya know? anybody who wants to write that id definitely read it! lol...but keep it up witht his story sucks that its almsot finished but....as they say all good things must come to an end...lol
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  • From ANON - Amy on October 16, 2006
    I love this story. I can't wait to see how it finaly ends up. I enjoy your writing style.
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  • From ANON - dee on October 16, 2006
    love the story...update soon!!! you should make a sequel just so you know. :-D
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