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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul on October 22, 2006
    Damn that was an intense 57-58.
    I don't blame Severus for his snippiness
    on the potter front. I wish he was allowed to curse potter with impotence forever aka Cannot Get it up!

    The little bastard is milking his so called innocence for all he's worth. Actually I do hope Hermoiune allows Sevvie to gpo through with the playwitch thing. Then she can turn around and tell those bitchres to nback off she's His pet NOT them! and insinuatrew trhat only inteligent and beautruiful witvches may be allowed in the I fuck a well hung harper club.

    I hope Luna Lovregood joins the IFAWHHC true she may not be conventionally inteligent but that was due to mosyt probablly her powers and or a time turner swallowed in youth.

    Still holding out hope thast Ginny and Gail join Hermoine in the Harper or Potion Master appreciation club, or I just got royally shagged by Shagadellic Snape. Damn Austinb Powers hasn't got a bar nexct to outr snarky slythrerin babemagnet Eh?

    I know it sounds like I am demanding Snape be pimp master extrodinare? But I am not really Considering all his life has been full of misery and pain he deserves a few willing witches to be his comfort and Hermoine to be theire den mother. Yes I am a perverted kinky bastard. I vote Bara join the Sev side I mean he took Severus's advice(even if thinly veiled as sarcasdm) to hreart. I vote Basra demand to be Severus's son

    I know I know i'm a sentimental fool bringing broken people together in order to heal their scars. But I can't sodding help it.

    Bloody brilliant fanfic sofar!
    BrianDarksoul

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  • From ANON - bluedecor on October 22, 2006
    Wow...so hot, Ms. Figg! Is the next chapter the one where Severus tells Hermione he won't let her go?
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  • From ANON - Jan on October 22, 2006
    OhMyGods! This is one of the best story ever.
    Can't wait to see what happens when Severus goes to his house on the weekend, and see what both he and Hermione are going to do about their feelings.
    Can't wait till your next update hope it's SOON. ^_^
    Keep up the great work ^_^
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 21, 2006
    that was a great chapter too bad it was short.
    wouldn't mind seeing severus in playwitch though lol.

    maybe i have a problem with my plumbing o.o
    im sure snape could fix it. *wink wink*
    ohhh drama in the houseee. i really hope they stay together, either way keep writing great stories ;)
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 21, 2006
    Yeah, I think Hermione would walk out on him if he did pose for Playwitch
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 21, 2006
    Well now that it has come to the point of it ending, I am hoping that Severus does make it work.

    At least he believes her when she said she loves him, I just wonder if she will believe it herself.
    Good chapter!

    PEACE
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 21, 2006
    Ch 57 - Things are moving along very quickly now! Severus will be having trolls if Hermione catches him baring his ass or other parts in the magazine! Mind you this could be interesting if Hermione ever gets access to the internet and checks out Severus on the Playwitch site! WhoooHooo!
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  • From ANON - annie on October 21, 2006
    such a beautiful story!! i love this couple so much! that you for writing them so beautifly! i love this story!! and i do hope you'll update more quickly like you used to! but if not it's ok i love this story so much!! thank you~!
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  • From ANON - hermoine said so on October 21, 2006
    I've read ur new chapter and think it's bloody wicked. i really can't wait until the next one. i hope they stay together if both of them deny that they like each other it will tear them appart inside.
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 21, 2006
    Next thing we know, there both posing in Playwitch, together. Man... that would be hott... *drools* XD
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  • From ANON - elektrik_storm on October 21, 2006
    poor hermione, poor severus... lets hope that it all works out ok!
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 21, 2006
    oooh would i love to see that spread hehe. if you actually go to the playwitch.com website, you can see a spread of a photomanipulated severus with alabaster skin and scars, who is hung like a stallion. makes a nice accompaniment to this hehe, it also insinuates he is involved with mione.......
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  • From ANON - septentrion on October 21, 2006
    ch 57: so far, this story is one of my favourite of yours.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 21, 2006
    wow ... they are both thinking along the same line... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - reviewer on October 21, 2006
    Cara, I know what you are talking about, but I, like ms figg, have also had the gushes lol. I distinguish them by being turned on a little, or being REALLY turned on.
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