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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 21, 2006
    that was a nice chappie. loved how severus was so aloof to the reporters
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 21, 2006
    Hermione should really get those panti liners if that keeps up. .. Which it will.
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  • From ANON - anya on October 20, 2006
    TODAY is friday. Shouldn't Severus be with Hermione?
    Great press conference!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 20, 2006
    Cara: She IS a fountain. lol. She hasn't had any in what ... 4 months? Easily seduced? Yah, I would think so, particularly since Severus does it for her every time and he hasn't touched her in ages. It's been a long time...but I remember those little gushes way back when. Maybe not everyone gets them...I'm not an expert in that area...but some women do, otherwise there was something wrong with my plumbing. :)
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 20, 2006
    I don't know about you...but when I get wet, I can feel it but I can't feel any gushes coming out. You make Hermione sound like a fountain.
    It's also irritating how easily seduced she is.

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  • From ANON - Kris on October 20, 2006
    Mmmmmmmmmmmm, cant wait to see the people's reactions to the docu pensieves(?) XD
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  • From ANON - Linda on October 20, 2006
    Damn, so good! Not just the sex, which was awesome...but the emotions...you sure know how to write. I love them both, and they belong together. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2006
    This is a teriffic story. I am enjoying each and every chapter, keep going please.
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  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul on October 20, 2006
    Read upto 56
    *Does the victory birthday BB Dance*
    Gooooooooooooooo Sevvie Go Sevvie It's your birthday Hip hip horay.
    Die potter Die potter your a asshole rot in limbo!

    Actually I hope Gin decides she want's sevvie too a foursome Herm/Sev/Gin/Gail
    Leaving little asswipe in the cold where he belongs due to his atttude.

    CLEAN YOUR FUCKING ACT UP POTTER OR KISS YOUR FREINDS GOODBYE YOU ARROGHANT FUCKTARD!
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 20, 2006
    good chappie. Lol thats was so funny and defintiely a hot and Sexy Severus. Please update again soon. and thansk so much I am glad Harry and Hermione made up. Severus is just awesome. more please.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 20, 2006
    Another awesome chapter. Severus is such a jerk, getting her worked up just to wait! LOL!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 20, 2006
    heheh that wait well ... i love how sev can manipulate to get what he wants .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 20, 2006
    Yay for restored friendship!
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  • From ANON - hermoine said so on October 19, 2006
    i love your story i really can't wait until the next chapter. sorry i haven't reviewed before or i think i haven't but i've only just caught up. It's really wicked and you're a great writer keep it up.
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 19, 2006
    that was a much needed chapter. thank you :)
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