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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 18, 2006
    seriously wanted to puke when she was kissing the dementors.....cried when minerva came back, and laughed my ass off when severus playfully flirted with her....excellent update
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  • From ANON - nessa bessa on October 18, 2006
    snape... is going to hell
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  • From ANON - nessabessa on October 18, 2006
    as always, your work is fresh and original. i love you!
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 18, 2006
    Ewwww. Kissing Dementors is totally squicky! >
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 18, 2006
    Like how Severus isn't that effected by the Dementors !
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  • From ANON - angel on October 18, 2006
    ~lol~ ewww mione was french kissing dementors... i love it in glad minerva is back ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 18, 2006
    Yay! The dementors better watch out!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 17, 2006
    Cara: Severus is not the kind of man who would wear his heart on his sleeve. No one will know whether he is in love or not. Albus noticed because he knows Severus well. Most people don't, and the Potions Master isn't likely to change or become kinder toward anyone else, no matter how he feels about Hermione.
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  • From DoomGreen on October 17, 2006
    OH and I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts to Severus stopping her letters and kicking Harry's sorry ass.

    Bara has got to be the most unusual touch to this...
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  • From DoomGreen on October 17, 2006
    I swear, this is like a very strange... naughty addiction.
    More please, again, before I have withdrawl symptoms.
    Yaay Minerva coming back! 8D
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 17, 2006
    thank god woman you sure update fast.
    hurray minerva is restored.
    i wonder what will happen when hermione and severus come back home?
    and the paparrazzi?
    oh boy.
    yes, i sense this story coming to an end very soon. hopefully there will be more stories to come ?? :)
    i do hope hermione forgives harry. funny how the men get mad at the women but the men are the ones to apologise. heh heh.
    i liked the observation albus made, that severus was changing, or changed.
    but you need to have more people recognise the changes in him so it will be more pronounced, do you know what i mean?
    great plot & story lines. it makes this story different than a pure smut fic.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 17, 2006
    Chapter 52 was an evil plave to hang, I am just glad that 53 followed so close so I would not be tortured with waiting. LOL! I am so happy that Minerva is back! LMAO! Severus is so freaky about germs! LOL!

    Not even staying with Hermione, mean Severus! OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can not wait till he gets back to the house on Friday! It ought to be great!

    PEACE♥
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 17, 2006
    Ohhhh that was priceless! XD Loved itttttttttttttttt! Cant wait for more of course!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 17, 2006
    CHAPTER 51!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Severus rushed forward and caught the exhausted witch before she hit the lab floor. When Hermione realized she had found the proper elixir, all the wear and tear she had put on her body caught up with her. The witch was nearly dead on her feet. Severus looked down at her and shook his head.

    Slowly he carried the witch upstairs and tended to her, putting her in the bath and bathing her thoroughly, washing the semi-conscious witch's hair and adding replenishing potion to the water. Severus dried her, dressed her in a nightgown and put her in his own bed. He then undressed down to his boxers and slid in beside her, drawing her warm body into his and listening to her breathe.


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2006
    AAAARGH! If there was an award for most evil cliffie...you'd have in the the bag! BAD FIGG! Wonderful story, I'm literally on the edge of my seat waiting for more. :)
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