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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - firewall on October 16, 2006
    Ch 46-49 Wow! You certainly jam pack your chapters with tonnes of stuff. Looks like the Harper in Severus may figure greatly in the story...I just can't quite figure out how? LOL Guess that's why I'm the reader and not the writer.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 16, 2006
    wow. three splendid chapters.
    i really enjoyed them. cant wait to see where this is going...
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  • From ANON - angel on October 16, 2006
    yeaaa sev told her he is sorry and play his violin for her .. that was sweet .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 16, 2006
    Wow girl!

    Chapter 49 I thought was very intense. I loved it. The fact that Severus could ever say sorry to her was great, then he played and she came to him. I mean it is so damn obvious that they have such deep feelings for eachother. At least Hermione is able to see them in some way. I just can not wait till Severus can see it as well.

    Awesome chapter hun!

    PEACE♥
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 16, 2006
    Hmm wonder where Severus will be using his Harper techniques in the future.
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 16, 2006
    lol well the bird definitely solved the Draco problem well maybe lol can nevr be sure with a Malfoy. and bara omg hope he doesn't cause trouble. and I hope that stubborn bull Severus finally realizes before she slips away that he loves her. and what about Harry? do they ever make up? I hope. anyways good chappie. wonderful story. Update soon please. I love how you update quick.
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  • From ANON - elektrik_storm on October 16, 2006
    you updte very fast so i can't wait til tomorrow! :) i hope it won't be ending too soon!
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 16, 2006
    O hh I love it I love it. you are so awesome. ya Harry got it good. and lol Severus finally is admitting his feelings. and I really love how you portray him. it is really just so believeable. He's dark and harsh still and grumpy and all those things but he shows his soft side too. and thats wonderful. i love it. wonderful cahppies. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 16, 2006
    I would have bought those mints right away if they were real! And go Severus!
    Still feel kind of sorry for Harry though.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 16, 2006
    Hermione's learning new lessons in sex!
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  • From ANON - For me..... on October 16, 2006
    Just one word; hypocrite.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 16, 2006
    sweet lemons.
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  • From ANON - CB13 on October 15, 2006
    Mrs Figg - loving this! It has all the usual good bits and characters and story arc but you've dressed it up, as usual, and made it new and better. Thanks so much for writing these SS/HG stories; I can see from the over eighteen THOUSAND hits that I'm not your only fan. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 15, 2006
    Let's face it...the man is pure cool! hahahaha! Nicely done, Ms Figg!
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  • From ANON - Dark Marks and Lemon Drops on October 15, 2006
    Severus was absolutely splendid! his interaction with Harry was, as well. The way you are portarying Severus's burgeoning feelings for Hermione is so very in character; and yet, utterly breathtaking.
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