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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - firewall on October 14, 2006
    Ch 4? - Trust you to drive home the truth...Hermione did enter the patronage deal for Harry. Ginny is definitely a mature witch to be able to be so honest with Harry no matter how much it hurts. I'm glad she didn't leave him right now because he would be left alone since he is still in hiding. Harry is dealing quite well with his lost 8 years although it would be interesting to see how he deals with the wizarding world and its changes.

    Poor Hermione. Although she is missing Harry, she needs to experience tender loving Snape style. It may just be what she needs. That was a really touching story, Ms Figg, and the next one promises to be really hot.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 14, 2006
    Ch 43 - Harry made a good choice and one that was right for him but it will be devastating to Hermione. That Severus, she really should know better than to let her guard down. hahahahaha
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 14, 2006
    Awwwe. XD
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 14, 2006
    i'd be happier if i didn't have to wait for the lemons...
    oh well. it's your right considering the last two chapters you gave us. they were good too. i shed a tear. :/

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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 14, 2006
    awwwww! *sob* That was so sweet, I am eager for the next chappie.
    (Good let down scene with Harry and Ginny, I actually felt the clench of pain you get when your significant other informs you they are not on the same page as you)
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 14, 2006
    awww man. tough situation and I did not see the whole Ginny thing coming out that way. So in a way Hermione was rigtht but still she was really cruel and should at least apologize. but ohh well. and uggg cliffie just when it was getting good. but I love it anyways. Good chappie.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 14, 2006
    im glad that is al out in the open now .. and your right he has some serious groveling to do ... hmmm please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 14, 2006
    ohhh nooo Hermione really did stick her foot in it. how mean. I can kinda feel her though, but ugg she really needs to apologize. and I am wondering if mr Draco might persue Hermione lol to give Severus a kick in the right direction. it would be funny. well maybe not if Draco forced the whole thing but that would leave an opening for Severus to be her hero. lol. but anyways I feel so bad for Ginny. Hermione was just too cruel. and she really has no right to talk. I just hope she can repair the damage she has done to Harry and Ginny. I'd hate to see them part as friends now. She worked so hard to get him back. Perhaps she fancies Harry deep down maybe thats what made her say those cruel things. I just hope things worrk out. anyways Nice chappie. yes u can feel the angst.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 14, 2006
    I love the audacity of Draco in your story...going in and transforming a rickety chair into a comfy one and then throwing Hermione and Severus to the wolves, er, reporters because I just bet he is going to spill the beans.

    Hermione is amazingly narrow minded, isn't she? Especially for someone who likes her sex a little rough. SNORT! a little. She's just lucky Severus is so possessive with what is his because she might have found herself in a threesome with Draco and Severus. LOL Whew! I'm feeling a little hot here.
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 14, 2006
    Ouch. That sucks. O.o Cant wait for more chapters, as always! =P
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  • From ANON - angel on October 14, 2006
    man mione how could you say that about ginny ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 14, 2006
    you're very good at leaving us hanging. :/

    i dunno, she should get over ginny but i do feel sorry for her cuz no one has told her they loved her..
    interesting scene with draco. god he annoys me
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 14, 2006
    aww what a sad place to leave us :( poor ginny :( and poor mione too. i know her anger stems from jealousy, not from a genuine hatred.
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 14, 2006
    Readers: You know it occurred to me when I was writing this story, that a lot of tales involving Severus and Hermione waking up together and going at it never touch on the realities we KNOW exist...like bad breath. Severus' sense of smell plays a big part in this story, he doesn't like to smell anything he deems unpleasant on Hermione...unless its the scent of sex. Yes, the Weasley twins are quite handy. They make anything and everything. :)
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 14, 2006
    For some reason I am suddenly strongly reminded of Beauty and the Beast.
    Ah and now for my annoying part of this review. :p Will Hermione and Severus get together before the patronage ends, or will they go their seperate ways which will lead to more plotlines and writing?
    Dun dun duun. [ok annoying part over]

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