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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 14, 2006
    I LOVE your Weasley products. No idea how you come up with such funny names and adverts. First it's the licorice whips and candy chains [I think thats what it was] and now it's breath mints. xDD Laughed so hard reading that.
    :) And Whoa on Harry. No kidding on Hermione being thrown for a loop!
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 13, 2006
    wow that was very mean of him. i would have been pissed at him too.
    great chapters...
    now things are really accelerating between the two.
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 13, 2006
    I love it. His library is awesome. LOL at him thinking Hermione had never tasted his ham before. He needs to get over himself, and admit to at least himself he is in love with her. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - elektrik_storm on October 13, 2006
    more more more! this is soooo good! i love the way you have humanised hermione in this chapter with her jealousy! :)
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  • From ANON - angel on October 13, 2006
    poor mione.. well thin will get better .. now sev know the when it is over she will miss him ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - annie on October 13, 2006
    awwww omg i loooooooooooooooove this story sooooo much!!! you are such a fantastic writer i love coming home everyday and being able to read a new chapter! thank you ms figg!! this story is wonderful!!
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 12, 2006
    Severus the psychiatrist?
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 12, 2006
    Ch 36-39 - Wow! What a lot of developments. Harry was pretty quick on his feet when he made his home unplottable. Lots of soul searching about his relationship with Ginny. I'm still reserving judgement there.

    Bara is such a cute little Slytherin and I got a kick from the way Severus talked to him. Too bad though about poor Precious missing out on a tasty meal. I personally wouldn't have had a problem with the dining of Rita. Buh-bye.

    That was some pillow talk, Severus and Hermione had...I wonder if she'll accept and let him show her a new way to enjoy sex. Goodness knows if anyone could, it would be the Potion Master.

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  • From ANON - lisa on October 12, 2006
    I think you did really well with that chappie and I love seeing this side of Severus. I think you did great. It sounded beieveable like it was something he would say since they are becoming closer and he is more enamored with her. so kudos. and I cannot wait for me. Please update again soon. and thanks for another wonderful chappie.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 12, 2006
    Usually in your stories its the other way around [ie Hermione doing the nice type of sex thing] :) Nice tournaround. Yeah Severus wasn't overly fluffy so you did well
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  • From ANON - PinkMartini on October 12, 2006
    You are a great writer. I love this story. i love that you update fast and keep the story interesting. Keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 12, 2006
    Yum. Draco sounds like fun. Except the whole sleeping with half of the witches in society is a put off. Hm.
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  • From ANON - DJ on October 12, 2006
    Wow! I'm glad that Sev is showing a more tender side. Hermione must feel devastated, almost as if she hasn't been satisfying him.
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 12, 2006
    Oh I like the sell the memories thing! =D
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 12, 2006
    Once again, an update more than worth the wait. I love that Rita was exposed, although I agree with you about how it would have been funny for the snake to eat her. I also love that Severus is falling so hard for Mione, but doesn't realize it...or maybe he just doesn't want to realize it. Eager to see what happens next!
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