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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 15, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From DB1 on June 12, 2007
    @68. this story needs a sequel!!!! What a way to end it with Bara becoming a dark lord!!! Very hot story, I loved it!!!

    *DB*
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  • From Darkless on May 13, 2007
    DAMN! What are you, a writing fiend?? Wow, another epic story and a dangling end, teasing us with the possiblility of a sequel. Hehehe, great story, unique plot and, again, wonderful character representaion and interaction, not the least of which, all the fantastic smut! Took me two days to read it (68 chapters!) and I enjoyed every word. Thank you for sharing this amazing talent of yours.
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  • From ANON - Brenna on April 12, 2007
    4-12-07:
    This was an awesome story. I am also reading a number of your other stories (they are all so good!)

    Is there a sequel to this one, dealing with the rise and fall of Bara??

    -brenna
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on February 15, 2007
    I have to say the ending was just evil. So cruel of you. But I love it.
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  • From brainorgan on January 24, 2007
    On chapter 11 here - I love your theories - I recognized some of them - thank you for saying what they were at the end. I love doing astrological charts by computer, so easy to rectify!
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on January 08, 2007
    Ms. Figg: I loved this story so much I had to go back and read again, and leave a better review. The amount work and detail that you included to flesh out this story is marvelous, and overwhelming. The visions you create are so vivid, so real ... I could feel the sand and hear the surf. The Harper/violin struck a deep resonant chord with me. For quite a while, I sang with an orchestra choir. The altos always rehearsed with the first violin. Geez, when that man played he was transformed, and took us with him on the ride. I swear I could hear that instrument sing under his skilled fingers. As long as I could focus on his playing, it seemed I could follow the most complicated pieces. I have always felt magic from a virtuoso and their chosen instrument. Thank you so much for sharing this story with all of us, but especially me.

    For the most part, my mind just cannot wrap myself around a Snape/Hermione 'ship, but your tale wove their characters so well that their pairing became completely believable. I truly lost myself in the story.

    You have a true and rare talent.

    I wish you success in all your endeavors, Potterverse and otherwise.

    Bonnie
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  • From ANON - sinbad on December 17, 2006
    As usual Mrs. Figg an excellent story, but did Bara have to be a bad guy in the end?
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  • From ANON - WickedWitch on November 24, 2006
    I LOVE IT!! evil little thing to do with Bara though!!! Must write bara's story if you haven't already..
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  • From ANON - WickedWitch on November 23, 2006
    I've been trying to put off reviewing until I reached the end now that it's finished, but Bara finding Rita Skeeter and attempting to feed her to Precious was just...well PRECIOUS! I'm sure she changes back before it happens, but wouldn't that be sweet justice if you let it happen? LOL!
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  • From ANON - Dravana on November 12, 2006
    That has to be the most well-written story I have had the distinct pleasure in reading. I am so glad that you wrote it. Thanks for adding Eros to the mix towards the end. Plus Bara, a new Dark Lord, nice to say the least. I love the whole history behind it all. This story evoked a far few emotions out of me. Happiness, sadness, extreme satisfaction and wonder. Thanks again for your exquisite writing.

    Dravana Dragara
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  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul on November 07, 2006
    Epolouge~
    Oh Fuck me sideways. That was a rather unexpected twist. Poor Sev he will be dissapointed.
    I am dissapointed in his place. HOW COULD YOU!!!!

    Grerat story though.
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  • From Nyxx on October 28, 2006
    Terrifying the monkeys that inhabited an old temple? LOL Love it!
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  • From ANON - Grim on October 27, 2006
    ummmhhh!!! good fic you just went a little down hill at the end.
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  • From ANON - Moyra on October 27, 2006
    As a first and a last statement: this story was more than intriguing, it was just simply brilliant.

    I
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