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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 09, 2006
    That was very minxish of you indeed. What an utter tease you are! I can't wait to see the rest
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 09, 2006
    Ch 33 - Oh she is going to be in sooooo much trouble when he finally gets free but it would be worth it. Thanks for the sharing.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 09, 2006
    That was hot...I'm just really scared for Hermione when he gets loose. =0
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 09, 2006
    dun dun DUN DUNNN, man I want ALBUS to see what happened whenever they had to get harry back, the actual ritual. I dont know why, I just do! Oh my, cant wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - luce on October 09, 2006
    I've been away for a week, and looked forward to coming home and catching up on reading this fanfic the entire time. Can't wait for Harry's music to be completed. Wonder if Severus will have a perve through his mirrors? On to the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - angel on October 09, 2006
    man ..harry that is one way to scare someone.. man .. i hope mione plan works.... please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read mroe .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 09, 2006
    I love it! This story just keeps getting better and better! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 09, 2006
    Happyyyyy happyyy happy. new chapter!
    god you update so fast. one would think you were capable of magic yourself :p
    Aw you left us without a lemon. This better be a good one, now. tsk tsk
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  • From Chavela25 on October 09, 2006
    OMG! This story, it is so hard to belive that it can just keep getting better, but damn it, it does! I loved this chapter. Just because... I don't know small things leak out that Severus cares, whether it is giving away a precious ingredient or to uphold his duty as her patron and let her do this. I think this is exciting! I totally can not wait till the next chapter! LOL! I say that every time, but it is always so good!

    And the best thing... you update ALL the time! LOL!

    PEACE♥
    Isa
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 09, 2006
    Firewall: Yes, Harry fell right back into his pre-dementor demeanor, but that's where he was when kissed. He was always hostile toward Severus. To think that would change immediately was unrealistic, even if Severus did bring him back (for a small fee). Harry is still very protective of Hermione as if they were still students. Hermione is no longer a child and has a potions degree. She can make her own decisions. Harry is going to have to grow up. That's all there really is to it. Time hasn't passed for him.

    Now Ginny. Sigh. It would have been nice if she could have stuck it out like Hermione, but not to make excuses for her, but I can see it being too much for a young witch. Ron had died too...it almost seems she tried to find ways to numb herself...unhealthy ways perhaps to deal with her guilt...sex as an outlet, escape and punishment. Maybe. We'll see what happens in any case. Maybe she'll turn Harry into a freak too. lol
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  • From ANON - MysticF on October 09, 2006
    This story is absolutely heartwarming. I never imagined a way to bring back people who were Kissed. I want to see Minerva again.
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  • From ShilohDarke on October 09, 2006
    YEA!!! A pleasant surprise! I had just finished updating my own story, then noticed you had put up another chapte ron yours, so I had to come have a look-see... I love the reunion. The plan Hermione has sounds a little scary, but I love the idea! Sleep well, dream wonderful dreams, and then, come back and write some more at your earliest convenience!

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - Nemesis on October 09, 2006
    Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I simply lick arse, now don't I? I really like your fic, though I would have probably made it OOC. I would have had Hermione make Harry choose between her (as his surrogate sister) and Ginny (as his lover). I would have had her show Harry, via Pensieve, how she was loyal to Harry while Ginny abandoned him to bed random men. Honestly, if Ginny cannot suffer Harry's illness (because no one truely knew what he was experiencing), would she be there for him if he had cancer and needed treatment? In my experiences, those who do not make themselves available regularly are rarely present when needed. But that would have made Hermione OOC, and would change the fic. And I like your fics so much I wouldn't want to change them. Though, I thought I'd inform you of my angst regarding one useless Ginerva Weasley.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 09, 2006
    Ch 32 - You posted this just before I went to bed...It's 1:43 and I'm wiped but your other story, Daddy Dearest, has caught me and I can't stop reading. Harry is right in the swing of things again, isn't he? Dear, dear, I think they needed a little more male bonding because Harry seems to have forgotten rather quickly what he owes the Potion Master. LOL Anyway I'm off to bed, not as interesting time I'm sure as Severus and Hermione will have...sly wink. Night.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 08, 2006
    WONDERFUL!

    MORE, please update soon! I am so happy Harry is back!

    And now hopefully Severus and Hermione can go on, without her thinking about Harry so damn much! LOL!

    PEACE♥
    Isa
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