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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - firewall on October 08, 2006
    Ch 29 LOL - You brat, Ms Figg!!!! That has to be the most evil cliffie I have read on this site. Hahahahahahahahaa You go, girl!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 08, 2006
    wow ... eli and dobby cant you just get along ...hehehe sev is falling for mione .... what what did mione see.. please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2006
    Wow, you stories just keep getting better and better, I can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 08, 2006
    Wow, wow wow. You are evil, Figgy,pure evil. That was a wretched cliffie, you must update soon, you just must!
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 08, 2006
    Ohp, my bad. I read that sentence a few times, trying to figure it out lol.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 08, 2006
    Christ how could you!
    Damnnnnnnn need...to....know...what...will...happen. :(

    I'm not sure if Hermione's love for Harry is friend love, or lover love?
    hmm.
    good chapter.
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  • From ANON - amber on October 08, 2006
    i friggin love this fic! you have to write more soon or i might just keel over and die. update soon please. good luck! muchlove, amber
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 08, 2006
    Hey Cara: No, that wasn't a typo...Severus was the one with the appetite. :)

    Firewall: These dementors are from a couple that managed to escape from the Final Battle. The rest were destroyed, so those who were kissed as punishment died with them. The escaped dementors hold souls from England's wizarding world, but the new ones they bred have the souls of Untouchables, which more than likely they have to renew frequently since the bodies of their victims are in most cases allowed to die.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 07, 2006
    Ah a good chapter.

    Btw you made a typo. When Hermione isn't eating that much and Severus eyes her disapprovingly, you said he usually had a hell of an appetite instead of she.

    Other than that, everythings great!
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 07, 2006
    Ms Figg, you continue to astound me with your writing. This story is very poignant however. I love Minerva and her little digs at the Dementor. My fingers are crossed that she and some of the others will make it through. You are going to have a time of it if this works for Harry. The Dementors also kissed those who "deserved" it. Hmm, who is to tell who should be retrieved?
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 07, 2006
    Whoa Harry's running?!
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 07, 2006
    Oh my, next chapter plz! =D
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  • From ANON - angel on October 07, 2006
    wow ....im glad harry did react ... hmm will mione tell sev what harry did ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 07, 2006
    You're number 10 on the list!
    How could you?? =0

    Lol jk. I was looking forward to a chapter today, but I can wait.
    Wow I guess I read so quickly through your writing I didn't notice the run on sentences, and usually I'm such a grammar nazi. Hmm.

    Well I'm off now, maybe you'll have a chappie up later.
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 07, 2006
    Takemeaway: Yes, I have always used Deatheater or deatheater. I think it is because I have never read the first 5 books, but listened to them on audio. I used to spell Pomfrey...Pomphrey as well, and McGonagal rather than McGonagall. I have to break the Death Eater habit. :(

    Carol: I do my own editing as I write because sometimes I do two or three chapters a day and don't have the patience to wait on a beta...so any run-on sentences are my fault. I also don't use betas because there are some technical no-nos that I use when writing which would never get by them. No-nos I want to use. So, there it is.
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