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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - carol on October 07, 2006
    I think that your writing is brilliant. Very inventive, and I love the story of the origins of the Dementors, a neglected area in all Potterology.

    But, I wish you or your beta liked commas. It is very strange to read drosslike run-on sentences amongst the gold. It interferes very much with the reading experience.

    Who is your beta?

    Sincerely,

    Carol
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  • From writtenwithapensealedwithakiss on October 07, 2006
    Another Lovely Chapter. Although, I never expect anything less from you. you are an excellent writer. I love this story, and every other one of your stories I have read. I did notice one thing though, in all of your stories you use the term deatheater. In the novels it's actually Death Eater. Not a big deal, just a technical thing
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 07, 2006
    ...wildly writhing witch...That brought a grin to my face. LOL Hmmm, so he's hearing things he didn't want to hear...tough.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 07, 2006
    Aw I was hoping Hermione would respond to what he said, calling her a succubus. succubus my ass.

    Three new chapters! Wow. And good ones, too. Can't wait to see how Severus's feelings will develop in the future, and what will happen to Harry. Poor thing. :/
    Sex on the beach. How romantic lol.
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 06, 2006
    Oh snap!
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  • From ANON - lola_lola on October 06, 2006
    I like this story, as I do all of your others. But one thing about it really annoys me...the way that severus always calls hermione "witch". It just sounds wierd. It is very annoying to me when a friend always calls me "woman" lol

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  • From ANON - anya on October 06, 2006
    ~Bravo~
    This is brilliant. It's so very original; I am fascinated by the Dementors and their victims as Severus saw them, and that scene on the beach ... wow!
    ~Bravo~
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  • From ANON - Mirrordjyn on October 06, 2006
    This is terrible of me but all I could think about when they were having glorious, glorious sex was "Gee, I wonder if Harry is watching?"

    I'm sick! Oh gods.

    I love it anyway, thanks :)
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  • From ANON - angel on October 06, 2006
    wow ..... he really gave it to her and he told her how he feels in a way .. man .. please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 06, 2006
    ahh Severus you boneheaded male..
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 06, 2006
    Poor Severus losing his basilisk heart to a devious witch. But then again it's probably all for the best. :)
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 06, 2006
    Ahaha Basilisk Heart? xD Seems like things are coming full circle. :p
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  • From ShilohDarke on October 06, 2006
    Awesome! Two chapters up at once! I love it! That was really intense when Severus discovered that Harry is like a doorway to the Dementors. I wonder if they will share this info with Albus before or after they've made the attempt to save them???

    Please update soon! I really look forward to reading more!

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - angel on October 06, 2006
    heheh ... please please please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 06, 2006
    ohhh man just when it was getting good. lol I love it. Keep up the good work. and update soon please. and thanks for updating so fast. I really like this story and cannot wait to see how it turns out. lol and for sure Hermione has Slytherin tendencies. I think they are so good together though. I really love how you portray Severus. it's awesome. thank again and I will be awaiting more updates.
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