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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Bonnie on October 06, 2006
    Oh my oh my oh my - a skinny dipping Snape! Thanks so much for the image! Go Hermione ;)
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  • From ANON - annie on October 06, 2006
    oh gosh i just re-read my posting and saw i made a few boo boos first of all i meant MS figg not mr...sorry ms figg!! studying so much is not very good for my brain = haha and also i forgot to mention how i love the fact that hermione was ALL OVER severus kissing him and everything hehe i love this couple so much! thanks ms figg for writing!!
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  • From ANON - annie on October 06, 2006
    ahahah i kind of liked the flinging off of the house elves...it was very severus i actually chuckled for a while hehe....mr figg i LOVE your writing and you for writing them!! don't ever stop!! now i must get back to studying but this story is great!! and please please keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - DJ on October 06, 2006
    Karma is a bitch, isn't it Severus. Then again if you had known you would be laid low by that fickle mistress, you never would have let Draco into your rooms. Loved this chapter! Poor Sev had a close brush, glad to see he's okay.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 06, 2006
    wow ..i hope albus will be happy when sev tell him about minerva and what she said .. please please please please please update sooon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 05, 2006
    Yay, smart bara. =D
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 05, 2006
    Ah the first meeting between Bara and Severus.
    You seem to have a soft spot for House Elves don't you?
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on October 05, 2006
    MAN!!! I am really enjoying this! All the background stuff on the Dementors... Severus being a Harper... Bara (poor child! just makes me want to cry) But I bet there is some special way that sets him apart from just a weak wizard... I can sense it!

    I want more! I need more... When is Severus going to realize that Hermione means more to him than just a simple good f...? I hope Harry can be restored, along with Minerva.

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - annie on October 05, 2006
    hahaha i like that part about how severus finds hermione to be better than headache potions! that was so cute and funny i also love love love the little interaction with severus and bara!! oh severus how i love him! hehe keep it up ms figg! you're great!!! and your writing is too!!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 05, 2006
    aww i think sev is falling for mione ... im glad bara is going to try it sev's way .. hmm maybe sev will grow to like bara and be kind to him ... please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on October 05, 2006
    i hope they dont fight him when he trys to get guardianship of him ... please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 05, 2006
    Ch 22 - I really like the parallel thems running through the story...Dumbledore and Hermione's quests. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 05, 2006
    I don't think Severus is going to be too pleased with Bara hopping about.
    I have a feeling that Bara is going to get underfoot.
    But then again Severus might take a liking to the kid. :)
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 05, 2006
    Another chapter! Damn if only my fav. Predator authors updated their stories this quickly. :/
    About this chapter, this definetly adds a new twist to the story. Sorta disappointed that there was no Snape or Hermione, but I guess I'll have to wait for the next chappie.
    Now I'm off to go read some of your other stories to keep me entertained. =D
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - MysticF on October 05, 2006
    Minerva was really cool in this chapter, and Albus adopting that child, of course he would. This story is both very funny and very touching, and I love it.
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